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Lyric-Nothing Can Be Done
another lyric wrote

something big
that must be broken
that means i have work to do
so i have to go

so bye,bye,bye

taking a ride
and my stuff

getting ready for it
looking at the sky
the shining stars tells a long story

even though i have an idiot face
i can't stop smilling
due to the fact of the excitement

-CHORUS-

nothing can be denied
everything is pretty fine
don't feel idiot or stupid
just because you feel

-CHORUS-

why it's still taking long
gets an idea that never ends
maybe i'll know
it's still a long way to go

-CHORUS 2-

the rolling rocks can't compare
with something like this
a huge crater on the ground
and a desert place

-CHORUS 2-

still so lost
what a view
everything so dried
still can't believe

nothing can be done
so it's time to get back home

nothing can be done
nothing can be done


comments:you might found quite confusing about the transition from the last part to the 2nd chorus

its like change of scenario,i hope i could explain that






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RoxanneKil
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commentCommented on: Mon Oct 29, 2007 @ 09:07pm
how many of these poems did i miss?


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