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HEY PEOPLE...this is your ticket to know what my life is like
poetic person
i am not a peom persom...i made this up in like 5 minutes, tell me how you like it... yes it is about my love

in awe not too long
but it feels like forever
in love not too long
but it feels like forever

i look into your eyes
and i see happyness
a place to escape
a person to love

you shower me in affection
you give your love to me
i do the same to you
but it never seems enough

you and i keep our love secret
a secret u and i share
but when i hear your calm voice
i want to take off my disguise
of our love

i love you forever
i live in a hectic world
and you are my tonic
in my life



-crystal


is it good?
comment and tell me how it can be better

Sujung118
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  • User Comments: [2]
    Queen_Awesome_Penguin
    Community Member





    Tue Oct 02, 2007 @ 03:31am


    very very nice, lovely is a better word


    Sujung118
    Community Member





    Tue Oct 02, 2007 @ 04:28am


    sawa like it?
    i do, i think tonic was a bad word choice though


    User Comments: [2]
     
     
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