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This is a poem I wrote.....I dont know if it's any good but here it is...... Confusion clouds a weary mind, With worry,confusion,hate, and love all combined. Some say power and guns corrupt, I say it's emotions built up. Love conquers all, But some hearts have their downfall. XxLadyDarknessxX Poem created on 9/20/07

Posted by: XxLadyDarknessxX Sat Sep 22, 2007 @ 05:04pm

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A Souls End
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Sat Sep 22, 2007 @ 07:28pm

rewrite^^

Confusion clouds a weary mind,
With worry, hate, and love combined.
Some say power and guns corrupt,
I say it's emotions all built up.
Love shall always conquers all,
But some hearts have their downfall.

heh just a few changes^^

H-G-R Director
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 @ 10:52pm

b***h dont rewrite a good poem it is better than u

The Dark Lord Duran
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Sun Oct 07, 2007 @ 05:42pm

I'm not one much for poem it was good, very good ryme and it had something...what that is don't ask me

J d Spazz
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Tue Dec 30, 2008 @ 11:49pm

Not as good as the others, but still good.

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