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[06.04.07] ; [07.14.07]
MURDER MYSTERIES! :D

whee

So I have to write stories in my English classes.

Yes, classes.
Meaning there's more than one. gonk

Buuuuut, I'm having fun writing the 'hooks'
to the stories. XD


So much fun, that I'm going to post them here!



*First story, serial killer. O:

CRACK! A branch snapped from underneath her feet. Running, I have to keep running. Lucy could hear him behind her. He was just playing with her. She knew it. He thought this was a game. A game of life and death.

Lucy tripped and fell face down in the ground. The man walked by her and squatted down.

"No, please, don't!" She pleaded.
He grinned merrily, "Sorry," and kissed her forehead gently.

Her scream rang throughout the forest as he raised his ax and swung it down upon her neck. Then everything was silent.



Haaah. I'm going to make both of these stories very, very, very bloody and GORY!



*Second story, kidnap/murder.

Whimpering quietly, Ashley curled up in the corner of the cold, dark basement, hoping he wouldn't find her there. She heard a loud thud, and uttered a small cry. Ashley knew what that sound was from. Her husband was dead. He was coming for her next. Suddenly, she could hear quiet footsteps, creeping down the basement stairs.

"Come out, come out wherever you are," The stranger called out.

Her heart was beating a million miles a second, but all she could think of, was how she would never see her daughter again.

"Found you!" He grabbed her wrist, and pulled her upright roughly.

She cried out, "I know what you did, you won't get away with this!"

"Oh, won't I?" He grinned, revealing his yellowing teeth, the scent of mint leaves upon his breath.

The killer threw her against the wall, attacking her. A piercing scream broke the silence.




OH MY! I wonder what's going to happen next...
I don't know yet. ;D







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Rannii
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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 20, 2007 @ 12:54am

:] I liked it, especially the 2nd story.

D: Oiii. You have a typo in that one sentence in the last story.
I think instead of "killed" you meant to put "killer" right?


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