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Broken Heart Theres a pain, Taking it's reign, Upon my heart, I hope that it won't part, While I sit in shame, My voice whispers a name, Then this pain becomes heartbreak, Twirling around me like a snake, Hoping to overcome this task, Leaving me helpless without my mask, While tears flow, I hope you all know, This crime, Can only be resolved by time, It was a man who did this to me, Please help me, He's got me on me knees, Help me please! Past problems that have a scar...

Posted by: angel139 Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 08:21am

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Commented on: Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 08:38am

Commented on: Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 09:06am


	waisted breath walk into the night, to the darkest light, so long and good night moon, and good day stars, and hope the sun stays far, you wish on a finally hope, as you hang bye your last rope, before you choose life or death, you decide only on your finally breath, all you look forward to is the emptyness of the dark, as you cut your wrist a deeper mark, and as you feel the sting of the light, you take your last flight, and people still feel you here, you act like you disappeared.

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Commented on: Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 06:34pm

Commented on: Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 07:13pm

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Commented on: Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 09:26pm


	No silly, I like it. I've just never heard it before and I thought it was interesting. The difference is the dots, if I have three dots (...) or more then I don't like it. If I have one the I just thought it was interesting.

Commented on: Sun Jul 08, 2007 @ 06:12am


	hey i have a poem in mine too :3 just wanted you to read it! X3

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Commented on: Fri Jul 13, 2007 @ 03:08am


	pretty good like most of your poems. (I'm saying there all good, not that this one is like the rest, just to clear up what I'm saying.)

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