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“Every night I dream, it’s like I slip inside of something better… It’s like I walk through a door when my eyes close and after a period of walking I begin to dream. I always have great dreams… and it’s even better when they have a clear ending and beginning. That way I remember them, and they live inside my soul forever…”.
my poem
This is a poem that I wrote because this is what I think love should be. I belive if you turly love someone that you would give up your life to save them and I would give my life up for anyone because i love everybody.

A boy and a girl,
the best of friends.
From elementary to high school
from beginning to end.
Through all those years
their friendship grew.
They both felt the same,
but neither knew.
Each waking moment
since the day they met.
They both loved each other
sunrise to sunset.
He was all she had
in her terrible life.
He was the one
who kept her from her knife.
She was his angel,
she made him smile.
Though life threw him curves,
she made it all worth while.
Then one day
things went terribly wrong.
The next few weeks
were like a very sad song.
He made her jealous
on purpose he tried.
When the girl asked, "Do you love her?"
on purpose he lied.
He played with jealousy
like it was a game.
Little did he know
Things would never be the same.
His plan was working
but he had no clue.
How wrong things would go,
the damage he would do.
One night she broke down,
feeling very alone.
Just her and the blade,
no one else home.
She dialed his number,
he answered, "Hello"
She told him she loved him
and hung up the phone.
He raced to her house
just a minute too late.
Found her lying in blood,
her heart had no rate.
Beside her was a note,
in it her confession.
Her love for this boy,
her only obsession.
As he read the note,
he knelt down and cried.
Grabbed her knife,
that night they both died.
She was found in his arms,
both of them dead.
Under her note
his handwriting said:
"I loved her so,
she never knew.
All this time
I loved her too."



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User Comments: [2]
dark_caster_angel13
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Thu Jul 05, 2007 @ 06:33pm


nice poem mrgreen 3nodding 3nodding


[.kristin.megan.]
Community Member





Sun Jul 08, 2007 @ 02:16am


that's so good. aaaah. it's gonna make me cry.


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