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Life Takes a Turn
Im going to try and write a story about Five go lucky Teens on a road trip across the country. They are trying to film a BMX video of thire skills.
Chapter: 1
Chapter: One

The start..

Hey, my name is Scott McKay, I'm 17 years old. Don't be fooled, I'm not in Scotland or anything. Actually I'm in America. Arizona U.S.A!!
Lets get to the point. This is kinda a journal about my road trip. My freainds and I are going across America! Why? Well lets start from the beginning.

My freaind Matt Engle, Age 17, had found this awsome flier. It said something about a drawing for the next big BMX team.
They would train whoever, talented or not, to be a Pro. All they needed to do was get a tape of every area they biked in.

Matt and I have been friends since kindergarden. I know everything about him, and He knows everything about me. Were like brothers. The thing is, he's a lot more athletic than I am. I'm athletic too just not, jock sports team captian, athletic. I'm more use to being the side player of everything.
Kinda like the camra guy..... Exactly like the camra guy!

Well Matt's idea was to set up a team. We needed One more Rider and one more camra man. I know, who needs a camra man when you got me. Matt Wanted me in the action. I wouldn't be the camra man sitting there filming, I would be the one riding right behind the action!

The Aditions...

Ok, we set up aditions at our school. We had a good amount of people come, not a lot but enough.
It was becuse Matt is the school's Soccer Captian. The position for Rider was up first. Most of them were realy good....... campaired to a monkey.
We had people bring in things from tricycles to snowboards. Sad huh? That's putting it the nice way.
One guy was sent to the Hosbital.

We ended up picking A guy named Kyle Cruz, age 16. We knew him from ower classes from last year. He's kind of a positive-attitude person, Like a little brother. He is a little shorter than us, so you could guess his age right off the back.
He could do a couple good tricks, but he seemed to fall off his bike a lot.

The Next half, of the aditions was for the second camra man, or should I say 'Camra men...'. The first interview we had was the last! We had two people walk in, Twins!! They were Vincent and Jake, both age 17.
Do you know how Cartoons have thoose salesmen? Well if you saw how Vincent and Jake did there interview then you would think of them.
They said That if we had at least two diffrent angles of the same trick, then ower video would make everything look ten times better. So they convinced BOTH Matt and I into letting them take the job.

Vincent and Jake sound a lot like each other! But they do have there diffrences. Vincent is a lot more hot headed than Jake, but Jake shure makes up for it with his quick remarks.

"Wow, today sure was amazing right? I think we picked good people." Matt said nodding his head. "Now that we settled who's going, lets work on renting that bus!!"
That struck me by suprise.
"What!?! I thought we were sleeping in a hotel!!!" was my reply.

"Nope, we'er going to do this right. Its cheeper anyway." he said grinning and putting his arm around me.







((Ok through out the rest of this story I'm going to be typing like its a regular RP, I'm just going to be the onlyone writing it. rofl I will also have some help editing.... I hope. One of my friends is helping me with that, but i need to ask if she wants her name in it.
And the last couple things are that im going to do everything from a third person point of veiw. No 'I' anymore, its just going to be 'Scott said' or 'Scott wined'
I'm also going to put color into the writting.))


Scott= red
Matt= green
Kyle= orange
BOTH TWINS= BOLD black
Jake= maroon
Vincent= black






User Comments: [1]
KohakuShuicirosGuardian
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Sat Jun 09, 2007 @ 07:14am


nice!


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