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swimmer64
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Two random poems I WANT TO BE COMMENTED ON PLEASE!!
SEASONS
Leaves fall to the ground
Im walking lost
Feeling im going in circles round
Seeing the new frost
Knowing winters coming
Hoping it wont last
Know the snow is numbing
From deep within your past
Fear grips as you push forward
Waiting for the end
Realizing the cold is bringing you backward
Looking for the bend
Where your path seperates
From this barren land
And turns from hate
and takes your hand
To bring about change
and happiness
within your range

FEELINGS
Its starting to rain
But I cant complain
Its not as if i hadnt wanted all to dissappear
The drops reach my ear
I feel the tears fall
But i remain standing tall
I refuse to break
Knowing what is at stake
The power of my mind
Will leave the pain behind
When I realize my mistake
Will it already be too late
How could i forget
That you were the only one I met
Who cared
To listen to the feelings I bear
To fix my pain
Your my rain
Who cleared my dirty window and made it clear
That the one you need is always near
And giving up before you start the race
Not showing your true pace
Will cause even more pain for those around you
So what will you do?

sorry my friends for not being on in awhile i love you all but finals are coming up and i gotta study i'll try an be on as much as possible but duty calls...and duty sucks.....bleah finals are my worst nightmare put on paper...waaaaaaaaa! i dont wanna fail.....so please dont be angry at me for not being on.....oh and Tormented Darkness sorry for not being on and of course your my friend silly ^_^
hehe from the girl who loves to poke people swimmer64! blaugh





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Surf_dude55
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comment Commented on: Sun May 13, 2007 @ 06:02pm
Yay! A journal entry!! I like them both, but I like the second one a lot more xd


comment Commented on: Sun May 13, 2007 @ 06:11pm
yeah me too.... lol



swimmer64
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greenponytailgirl
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comment Commented on: Fri Jul 27, 2007 @ 09:33pm
wow how poeitic i had no idea you could rhym!


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