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Burning Amber's Poem Place
A place to write my Poems.
Alone
This is my first real poem ever!


Alone

Why must I travel this world alone?
Is it my destiney?
Or is it my hatred for the world?
Why must I carry such lonelyness?
I shall never know
And that is a fact
I long for love from another
But I shall never get
I dream of the day when my heart
Will be taken from me
That will never happen
No one knows the real me
They just know an act
All they know is the joyous side
They shall never know the dark side
The side that hides from the light
That is what I know from life
I have been chosen to travel this world
Alone for all eternity
I shall hide from love and joy
It is my hatred for the world
And it is my destiney
I do care for others
But I shall never be loved by another
It is my fate
And I know it for a fact.






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Deufo
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commentCommented on: Mon Apr 04, 2005 @ 03:44pm
Good poem but its sad...but i guess thats what makes it better...but im not so sure about the love part....ur 2 nice not to be loved xd and ur personality kiks a** haha


commentCommented on: Mon Apr 04, 2005 @ 09:13pm
I wrote this in a depression stage...sometimes I still believe it...not ever being loved....



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Deufo
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commentCommented on: Fri Apr 08, 2005 @ 06:31am
dont say that...i love you! *kisses u* o.O srry


commentCommented on: Sun Apr 17, 2005 @ 06:04am
*blushes* your just saying that aren't you? *sigh*



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