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deathgod110 Report | 10/30/2013 12:47 pm

Niome peered around the room left, right, students, teachers and parents everywhere. All eyes were glued on her then a beat of sweat ran down her fore head she cautiously moved her right hand to the black and white checkered board in front of her and grabbed the queen to make her final move “check mate! Game set match Niome wins” said the referee. A boisterous uproar filled the tiny library with lots of noise then a crowd started to run to congratulate the third time champion Niome heartwood. Niome whipped the sweat from her fore head and slipped through the crowd to congratulate the mysterious boy she was up against. The boy was sitting at a round table looking at his second place medal he had earned. The boy had pretty dark blue eyes that were filled with sorrow but blond silky hair. “Good game” Niome said as she approached him slowly. The boy griped the silver medal in his fist tightly and stood up. He immediately glared at Niome as if she had done something wrong. “It wasn’t a good game” he yelled… “What it that you want… do you want to rub your trophy in my face?” The crowd looked over at the commotion that was happening and slowly infused Niome to be the center of attention again. The boy turned around and walked away vanishing past the crowd till he was nowhere in sight. The referee handed Niome a huge trophy that read Pittsburgh champion of 2012, when the commotion started to die down several minutes later and everyone finished congratulating Niome she made her escape out the back door of the public library. I wonder what was with that boy Niome thought as she started walking home. It irritated her to have to think about such a rude boy, but he was really cute. On her way home Niome stopped at all the places she went to as a kid with her mother. A few blocks away from her house was a bakery that sold pastries, wine, cheese, and bread. Niome entered the shop without a moment’s hesitation, even knowing that she forgot her purple wallet in her mom’s car. “The smell of this place brings back memories” she said as she looked at all of the delicious pastries and different kinds of bread. Niome walked up to the front counter of the bakery and dinged the bell a few times. “Hold on a second” a voice called out from the back. Then out from the back came an old lady who was carrying a pie and had an apron on. “Oh my… I believe my eyes are playing tricks on this old bag of bones” she said about to drop her fresh homemade pie. “Is that really you niome.” She set the pie on the counter to cool and hugged Niome. She grabbed her face and kissed her on both sides of her cheek, “how long has it been my dear seven maybe eight years… when I last saw you were eight year old how old are you now my dear.” Niome looked at Mrs.Peter and smiled “it truly had been too long Mrs.Peter I am 16 years old and I am in the tenth grade.” “What brings you here to the bakery?” Mrs.Peter said. “Well I’m leaving for New York today and wanted to say good bye and thanks for everything.” Mrs. Peter’s eyes widened as she stepped back to the counter… “Oh my, that certainly is a big surprise.” Her eyes started to tear up... “Well I don’t want to hold you back talking to me, you should hurry home and get to packing.” Tears started to flow down her wrinkled old face. Mrs.Peter went to the back of the bakery once more and pulled out a huge plastic bag. She opened the bag, and put a whole bunch of pastries, bread and cheese in it. She also sneaked a bottle of wine in there hoping no one saw. She tied the plastic bag as tight as she could and staggered over to hand it to Niome. “Take this as a token of my thanks and make sure you give the wine to your mother” she said wiping the tears from her face. Niome placed her hand over Mrs. Peter’s hands and sincerely said thank you. Niome grabbed the bag, and headed out the door glancing back to wave one last good bye to Mrs.Peter. As Niome wal

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