Life is a b***h, Destiny is an a**
Put them together and what do you get?:Us
Abandonded and confused, we turn our emotions to anger
Fate can only lagh at us, Hope can only fuss
We kill one another; so much pain, so much suffering
But hopfully it won't last, like he told us so long ago
Time dosen't love, Time doesnt hate
He tells us somthin wonderful
He tells us of how our parents mistakes shall be fix
But could it be a lie? No! It has to be true, it has!
So leave those tears unshead he saidFor soon we'll all be dead.
Alex_nightmare Community Member 
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If you can work in some imagery, it'll be wonderful, which is actually surprising, considering the nature of your previous poems. This is ....
neutral surprised <-- combine those two for my expression.