She puts the razor to her wrists
swipe it acrossed, nice and swift
all the pain that was there that day
begins to slowly fade away.
One last time, acrossed it goes,
As the blood, gently flows
She couldn't help what she felt inside
She only knew, she wanted to die.
To go to the place where flowers are black
where nobody knew, that she wanted to be dead
that was her dream as she were lieing in bed
One day it got to such a painful thing,
she knew at once, it was her destany
She picked up the razor, rusted from blood
And Hapy played, like a kid with candy
thinking, oh my, this will be quite dandy
She locks the door and closes her eyes
hoping it would work, that she would die.
puts it up to her neck, lightly cuts,
feels the trickle, better than lust
she crys in happiness, noone would hear
She was alone, alone in this world
alone ni her dreams, even when it gently rains
She hears I door, hears her mom yell she's home
she thinks of saying goodbye,
but it would giveher to little time,
she puts the razor to her neck,
aas her mom trys her door,
she starts to freak,
her mom breaks it done, a minute to late,
she takes the razor sharp and fast,
and you hear her dieing gasp,
a slurred goodbye,
her moms memory of her,
now she is never to be bothered
with this world, so bittersweet,
this is where, hers and mine fates shall meet.
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This is my orrignal work bitches, steal it and die.
Feel free to comment though. I don't care anymore.
swipe it acrossed, nice and swift
all the pain that was there that day
begins to slowly fade away.
One last time, acrossed it goes,
As the blood, gently flows
She couldn't help what she felt inside
She only knew, she wanted to die.
To go to the place where flowers are black
where nobody knew, that she wanted to be dead
that was her dream as she were lieing in bed
One day it got to such a painful thing,
she knew at once, it was her destany
She picked up the razor, rusted from blood
And Hapy played, like a kid with candy
thinking, oh my, this will be quite dandy
She locks the door and closes her eyes
hoping it would work, that she would die.
puts it up to her neck, lightly cuts,
feels the trickle, better than lust
she crys in happiness, noone would hear
She was alone, alone in this world
alone ni her dreams, even when it gently rains
She hears I door, hears her mom yell she's home
she thinks of saying goodbye,
but it would giveher to little time,
she puts the razor to her neck,
aas her mom trys her door,
she starts to freak,
her mom breaks it done, a minute to late,
she takes the razor sharp and fast,
and you hear her dieing gasp,
a slurred goodbye,
her moms memory of her,
now she is never to be bothered
with this world, so bittersweet,
this is where, hers and mine fates shall meet.
</3
This is my orrignal work bitches, steal it and die.
Feel free to comment though. I don't care anymore.
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