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the journal of a fox demon with ADD >.< This is song lyrics and my random a** comments that I love to put down.


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Ar Tonelico 2 Fan Fiction ^^
ok so this is my first fan fiction that I'm going to be working on actually. You see it was mine and nico's idea after I managed to get him hooked on the game ^^ so the story will have the same feel as the game however I don't know how i'm gonna add in the main characters from teh first game yet. here's a list of the characters from the game along with some pictures. I also will have character profiles in teh works on here so if you have an idea for a character, feel free to pm me about it blaugh

Ok here are the main characters from left to right (ignore the blue wolf. I cant remember his name at the moment) :
Amarie, Legluis, Coconna Bartel, Croix Bartel, Cloche Pastalia, Luca Trulyworth


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Character Proflies!
Alright so I'm putting up these character profiles up now. I have based some of these off of outside help with character ideas ^^ btw I made up all of the spells that you see these characters have so i hope I did a good job

Terminalogy:
Some of the words that I use may seem confusing so I'm gonna define them like the game does to help you understand a bit better

Rayevitale: A song mage who inherited the powers of the goddess at birth. The powers that they hold amplify with the power of love and affection along with hatred and disillusionment. The power a Rayevitale has is so great that the force eats away at her very lifespan shortening it to a span of three months. Life Extending Agents are crystals used to increase the life span by another three months and are placed against Life Extending symbols that are located on various parts of the body. A Rayevitale is born with this symbol already placed randomly on the body. The Crystal is them absorbed through the skin with the process being incredibly painful no matter how many times they experience it. Lastly, only a girl can be a Rayevitale.

IPD: To be honest I don't know what the acrinym for this is, but I will look it up soon. It basically an agressive virus that lashes out at Rayevitales and attacks the most random Rayevitales. The virus infuses the Rayevitales mind with hatred and sorrow and has two forms: Positive and Negative. Negative is the least leathal being that it's a highly sever case of depression and self loathing that carries on for a very long time. Postive is when the Rayevitale lets her hatred consume her and she begins to randomly attack buildings and people and the destruction continues till the power erupts from her body and vaporizes her. IPD does have a treatment however it is through Dive Therapy which is looked down upon as being grotesque and voilating. But the Grand Bell Army fights and defeats the IPD "Infected" into submission before they carry her off to an unknown location. IPD can take the form of one of seven levels with 1 being the weakest and 7 being a terror that is normally killed without even considering capture.

Dive Therapy and Diving: There is a difference between the two. Diving is when two people enter a Dive machine and they are put into a dream state in which case they can enter each other's mind. Lovers often like to do this as a form of increasing their closeness to each other. Rayevitales also dive with their lovers or partner army members to help unlock new forms of magic that are being withheld by a problem that the Rayevitale is inwardly facing against herself. Dive Therapy however is a form Diving that is considered "Sexual" in some contexts. You see Dive Therapy is when a Rayevitale who owns the Dive machine uses it to let other people into her mind as a way to communicate with her inner self to talk to them about problems that are heavily affecting them. This is considered sexual in the sense that you never truely know how the Rayevitale is helping the other person. Furthermore a Dive Therapist sees up to ten clients a day making her appear to be a prostitute. Dive Therapy is Illegal in Pastalia.

The Goddess: The Goddess is the spirit that watches over the land and continent. She also gives Rayevitales their extreme power. However whenever two Rayevitales attempt to sing MetaFallica (the song to create new land), she kills the Rayevitales who are singing. Thus two factions have formed in response to this: The Grand Bell army who is hell bent on destroying the goddess to allow the people to sing MetaFallica and the Sacred Army who fight to protect the Goddess and everything she has put into place.

Character Idea: I actually recieved this first character from a friend of mine named sasha. I asked her to put together a character based on hair color and personality but I'm controlling the appearance and story line for her. I would like to send my personal thanks to sasha for the help on this character
Name: Sky "Whisper of the Wind" Seren
Character Type: Rayevitail
Age: 16
Personality: Hyper and outgoing, Sky is known in her home town of Pastalia to bring unbridled randomness and cheerfulness where ever she travels to in the grand city. She is always nice to everyone that she comes in contact with, but should she grow annoyed, her anger isn't a very pretty sight. She tends to get snappy and annoyed at every word that is uttered by the person she is mad at. Her anger is rarely seen. She also has unbriddled determination in battle should she be called upon to fight with the Grand Bell Army on various occasions.
Element: Wind Magic
Resides In: Pastalia
Spells: She has three main spells that she can use:
Wind Spirit Serenade: As Sky begins to sing in the ancient langauge of the goddess a woman fairy no more that around a foot tall appears before her. The fairy wears a light blue kimono with a white wind like pattern with a very soft tint of green for her obi. Her hair runs in loosely kept tendrils of this same light green tint. The fairy then casts a quick instant spell that amplifies the speed of all friendly units within a twenty yard radius. Soldiers under the effect of this speed boost have been known to team up with one another to attack in teams of two that produce devastating results thus the name of the fairy became Serenade.
Barrier of the Cyclone: Singing in the same ancient langauge, Sky brings forth the very fury of the wind to mend into her own image, which in this case, is a barrier around herself in the form of a raging cyclone that encompasses five feet in a 360 around her entire body. Foes caught in this are thrown from their feet and tossed aside in a random direction like a useless scrap of paper.
Freezing Tempest: this spell is her only direct attack spell that she engages only if an enemy breaks her composure and causes a spurt of rage to escape into her fighting style. This spell causes destruction on a massive scale and has been used twice in her life. Her eyes appear glazed and lifeless not to mention cold and intimidating. She slowing raises a hand to the sky and sing softly and slowly to the goddess to call down a torrental cyclone of ice spikes and freezing water. This spell causes enemies to be frozen little by little as each drop hits them and freezes onto their skin meaning that they'll be frozen solid provided they cannot escape within fifteen seconds. The ice spikes also impale opponenets giving them nasty and grisly wounds that bleed profusely.
Character Aquintances: She knows coconna bartel and her brother croix bartel and has a loose idea of who luca from croix telling her stories, but she still has never met Luca in person.
Appearance: (A picture of her will most likely appear once nico has drawn her up, but until then...) She's an average height standing at a five feet and seven inches. She's taller than most women in Pastalia, but she isn't criticized for it. Her skin is light; almost a pale in complextion with black hair that falls evenly down to her lower back that has tendrils of blue and silver that streak through and dance in the breezes that often gently blow through the middle class district. Her eyes stand a sharp contrast with her dark brown/hazel eyes. Her clothing is rather abscure due to the fact that she is infact a rayevitale. She wears a shirt that covers her torso, but her shoulders are completely bare down to her elbows where she has darkish blue sashes with streaks of silver running in obscure patterns. Her shirt extends down past her waist and has a large floral design with the main color of the back ground being dark blue and the flower crafted in exquisite detail in shimmering threads of silver. Her lower half of her body is covered by a simple skirt that runs to her knees with an excentric design of more floral patterns that run in more exquisite and fancy patterns with dark blue still the main color but the silver containing trace streaks of a purple inside of them for a bit of a color change. Her shoes are comfortable and simple with the main color still being dark blue. A few symbols are painted on her shoulders and her life extending symbol is placed on her upper thigh.
Bio: Sky was born into a middle class family in Pastalia. She never had much to worry about as a child and her attitude she carries with her always shows that. Sky seems to be one of the few Rayevitales who considers herself lucky by the fact that she hasn't contracted a case of IPD yet. She had a friend who she visited frequently within the slums of the city, however one day, her friend contracted an IPD infection of category 4. Her case was a positive case. Sky managed to run to safety with the help of Croix Bartel, a soldier in the ranks of the Grand Bell Army. She has no desire to be with Croix in a romantic way, however him and his sister, Coconna Bartel, are close friends of hers. She has fought with Croix on numerous occasions along with Coconna and have been considered a great team and fighting force. Sky also runs a local Dive shop within the area and has been researching ways to cure IPD in secret. She still has not found anything to further her research due to the restrictions of Dive Therapy reading material that is considered a taboo in Pastalia. Currently, her life has been relatively calm and she has just been keeping a happy and peaceful profile just like she always has.


Character Idea: This character is actually a character of my own creation and is more or less a splitting of me in the story. You'll see my personality kinda leak into this character cause I like to write stories that are on a bit of a personal level that help with scene writing
Name: Axel "Hydro Rush" Fox
Character Type: Van Guard
Age: 19
Personality: Axel enjoys a certain extent of calmsness about him at time but he's normally hyper and ready to do just about anything. However around people who are new to him, He's abnormally quiet to the point where he's friends tend to notice it. His hyper side disappears when the call to arms takes place and the fighting ensues. He's cold and intimidating and seems to have a cold wall around his mind and soul; not budging for anyone or anything.
Element: Water
Resides In: Pastalia
Faction: Grand Bell Army
Weapon of Choice: An orange bladed rapier that is thicker than most are accustomed to. The slight weight increase allows for more powerful horizontal and vertical strikes which allows for a greater arrangement of strikes. The thicker blade also allows for stronger piercing attacks that have a higher chance of penetrating thick plates of the Sacred Army's soldiers. The rapier also allows for quickened agility that the enormous jousting staff croix wields cannot give. However Croix's staff can kill and wound faster than the rapier can, therefore Axel is heavily reliant on his footwork. He also has a gauntlet on his left arm that is jet black with a dark blue crystal embedded into top of the hand gaurd. This gauntlet allows for him to condence water around his arm and use it to attack and defend.
Ex Attack: "Crushing Rapids Infinity"
"The rushing rapids of the world condence to you!" he shouts to the heavens as his gauntlet glows a piercing light tint of blue. Water rushes in from all around him causing the space around his body to become dry and arid like a small pocket of dessert. He now charges his target with blinding speed and gives a flurry of ten quick and extremely quick slashes and then proceeds to kick the target square in the chest and knock the them flying into the air. "Ready for the cold water of reality my friend?" he then shouts as he throws his hand towards the airbourne enemy. Water explodes forth from his gauntlet and strikes the enemy in an enormous "beam" of water. As the beam draws to a close, he thrusts his gauntlet to the sky and water explodes for from the ground in the form of an enormous gyser. The water whirls around the enemy in a raging torrent and then crashes into the enemy at different angles making each punch seem like a hammer swing. To finish the brutal attack, he jumps to his enemy grabs them by the chest and throws them into the ground and quickly follows up with another blast of water like a hammer swing from the heavens. He lands on the ground with his back to the enemy and simply mutters with a large smirk on his face. "Reality's a b***h ain't it? Told you that you stood no chance!"
Character Aquintances: He has known Croix for a couple of years now since he joined the grand bell knights at the age of seventeen. He also knows Coccona when he and Croix found her after the IPD infection had reduced her town to rubble, but he only runs into her every now and again. Legulius is his captain now so their time they have known each other is short which usually makes their converstaions short and to the point.
Appearance: Outside of his occupation in the army, he dresses in plain and simple clothing that has some simple patterns and colors. His hair is long but only to the bottom of his neck in the back and is a light brown tint with orange eyes that are usually the first thing noticed about him. The orange eyes give him a bit of a primal or animal look to his light tan that his skin is. His shirts are normally white or black depending on the season in Pastalia with dark blue colored jeans that he always wears year round even in the hot summer times.
Bio: I guess the best way to start off Axel's bio is with his meeting of coconna when croix was leading him into the now destroyed city in which she lived in. Axel had been a new comer to war and destruction and seemed to be unphased by the battles he took part in, but the cleaning up from the category 6 rayevitale ripped into the core of his mind. The imagines of the burnt and torn bodies still haunt him to the very day in which this story takes place. This also contributes to the reason why his eyes seem to carry a certain amount of burden inside them. Luckily, he was not marred mentally to much. He still managed to keep his sanity. When croix found Coconna, she was badly battered but still breathing. Croix elected to take her in and Axel didn't mind letting him. Axel didn't want to have to look after a girl who already had a tough night. Furthermore the crushing rememberance of that night would haunt him every time he so much looked at her. His current past in Pastalia has been one of relitive peace and calm. The call to arms has not been made in his division for around two months now giving him time to forget about the crushing events of that day. He's been also randomly catching glimpses of a girl who runs a dive shop around town, but has not made any attempt to talk to her due to his slight fear of meeting new people. One could say it was from that fateful night he endured long ago, but he denies any alegations should they come up.


Character Idea: Ok so this is nico's character in the story. He wont make an entrance till later and his character will be one of the main things in the story that contradicts the way the game was in a large way. Read his bio if you want more information on how this happened. He gave me the ideas and I made them detailed!




 
 
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