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For thouse of you who know her you will know she is posting stories in her journal, well I desided to do that too. so here the first charpter

Title of story: tomb Robber
Summary: A newbie tombrobber is robbing the tomb that Bakura was planning to rob. What's to come?

Joey'sCuz: Hey this is my first fanfic. That I have typed and able to put on. I have a 15 chapter one at my father's house. anyways I hope you enjoy. R&R

Disclaimer: I own galawen and the bandits and whoever else isn't a main character on the show.

A/n:see during story.
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A young girl stood at the entrance of a tomb. She grinned as she tossed a rock down into the dark abyss.
" Nothing so far." she dropped a rock on each of the stairs as she went down. When she reach the bottom she started sniffing the air for any signs of poison. She grabbed a handful of rocks out of her bag and tossed them. " Nothing yet still. Geez...I'm starting ot thinking that this was either already robbed or this is one of the smaller stature pharoahs. Otherwise there would be more traps." she procedded deeper until she found another corridor. She threw some rocks around the corner. When they landed arrows flew out of random holes in the wall. " That must mean I getting close." She looked arounnd the corner and saw it was calm. She walked around and walked staight through. She felt the floor below her sink and four swinging pendulems dropped from the wall. She dodged the first one and ran past the other three. She sighed and laughed " ahh... this must be one of those trap thingys that are one after the other that are farther in." she said walking in deeper. she slowly made her wayacross the floor. she herad a click. and thought " let's see arrows pendulems and what's usually next..." then she was struck with realization "...PITFALL!" she said running across the floor, watching her step. She made it across and ran into the pharoah's chamber. The girl grinned widely as the room was lit by a torch hitting the oil in the middle of the room(a/n: National Treasure). The room was small but filled to the ceiling with treasures. She threw out the rest of her rocks around the room's floor. Nothing happened so she ran and grabbed a jewelled water jug and placed it on the other side of the door. She ran back in and grabbed a gold set of dishes. She ran back to the door and bumpped into a large gold statue of the sun god, Ra. It started falling to the floor and she pulled up the statue making sure it didn't hit anything she didn't want it to hit. she set the dishes over with the jug. She ran back in the chamber and filled her bag. with all the gold coins she could. She then spotted a gold and jewel incrested statue of ra. She stuffed it in her jug while the dishes were stuffed in the bag with the gold coins and ran back to the door. She gathered her prizes and ran out of the room. She got back to the traps which were now reset. She ran back across the floor where the pitfall was.When she got to where the pendulems were she took four long strides so if she tripped the trap she wouldn't get sliced. She grabbed a large rock and tossed it towards the floor is froont of her. the arrows flew agian and she went past when they were done. When she found the corridor she first came through she saw some other people coming down into the tomb. She ran across the passage and hid behind a statue of anubis and covered her face. She covered her treasures in black cloth. She watched the people pass and gathered her treasure. The gold coins clanked as she ran up the stairs. She made it to the entrance and pulled out a piece of papyruss, and wrote. " sorry needed your horse, I stole some as well.~ anonymus" She was getting on the horse when she was pulled to the ground.
" Hello, you thought you could steal a master theif's horse. Mister who do you think you are." Said a farly handsome starnger as he uncovered her face. " your a girl." he said as she jumpped on her new horse and rode away. the tall blonde with chocolate brown eyes stood there glaring hiding his shocked look.
Then next morning, the young girl was setting up her shop table wiht the treasures she stole last night. She was setting out all her best stuff, because the pharoah was suppose to be coming to the market thhat day. She set out the dishes and the water jug, she kept the Ra staute hidin under the table. She heard a set of trumpets blow and she looked down the street. She saw the pharoah coming down the street. He stopped at every tent and bought only three things. He then stopped at her table and looked at what she had. He bought the water jug, the dishes, two headresses, and 3 necklaces.
" You have a very interesting set of objects here, I will be leaving now." he said to his gurads. The guards nodded
" Hold on," He looked at her." Before you leave I would like to show you something." she said getting the gold and jewel incrested staute out from under the table. He froze in place and looked stunned. He grabbed I and stared.
"Where did you get this?"
" I made it." She smiled. He looked at her with disbelief.
" I have seen many people and their work and there is no way you made this."
" Never judge a book by it's cover my pharoah."
" I'll take it for this much." He said plopping a bag of gold coins on the table.
" Sold." She said colunting the gold. the pharoahs smiled as she bowed her head as he left. All the people ran back into the streets as soon as he was out of sight. She walked back into her shop and restocked everything as a group of tomb robbers came down the street.
~*~Bakura's POV~*~
' If that tombrobber, wait I bet she's not even a tomb robber, is even here. she is sure to have a table and her face will be showing' we walked down the streets of the marketplace. I spotted her just as she came back out of her tent. I ran over and stopped in front of her table. She saw me.
" Welcome to Galawen's shop. Can I help you, Sir?"
" Yeah, where's my horse?"
" Oh sorry about that, follow me." She said ledding me behind the shop as my gang guarded the shop. I made sure they didn't take anything." Here you go It's a very good horse,What's his name."
" Kilala, and it's a girl."(A/N: the cat demon off of inuyasha. Sango's pet.)
" Oh wait here." she said running into the tent again. she came back out with a huge sack." here take this it has food, gold, and a letter explaining everything and a few tips for tomb
robbing." I grabbed the sack and set it on the back of my horse. I went back out front and gathered my gang. We left the market place and got about three miles away when the sunset. We set up camp and I passed around some food. Like Galawen said, there was a note in there. I started to read it. "' Dear Tombrobber, sorry about stealing your horse last night. I had to make this shippment in this morning otherwise the bandits I owe money to were going to kill my family and...' Wait what... The bandits. oh no..." I dropped the letter. " you all stay here I am going some where." i said to my men. I got on my horse and took all the gold I had and rode back to the town.
~*~ Galawen's POV~*~
I was closing shop for the night when my little sister crawlled out the door. I turned around and picked her up. I heard a small noise like a blade coming out of it's holster. Iset my sister insdie and turned to see a tall group of men standing in front of my table. I reached under my table and pulled out the excat amount.
" Here all 23 gold coins, and 2 more if you never bother me or my family ever again." I said as the tombrobber rode over. He stopped and climbed off his horse. the bandits didn't even notice him at all.
" I don't think so little cutie, either you give us all the money you have or we'll cut off the little girls head very, very slowly." the Tomb robber grabbed his dagger and held it above his head. He dug it into the guy in front of him, He did it 3 more times and that took out the one that was confronting me, bodyguards. I looked back and saw him pull out a scarb.
" NO, don't." the tomb robber froze and reluctly put the scarb away. The bandit started laughing and then, he stopped almost instantly.
" Give me your money, NOW!" I saw the tomb robber, no longer wanting to wait, holding the dagger above his head. He swung the blade right into the area of the bandtis heart. He dropped like a sack of bricks.
" He is not a very smart bandit if he didn''t have any armor."
" He never wears armor when he collects money from girls, I never didn't find out what your name was."
" Bakura. Your's"
" Kimiko."
" Really then who's Galawen?"
" Allis name."
" Ahh... your smart. from a tomb robber."
" A new one at that."
" Really?"
" Yup. Hey you want to come in, a sand storm is suppose to kick up tonight. You and your gang can stay here for the night." I said covering my eyes.
" Thanks I will be back soon. I will go to them and see."
" Okay it will be unlocked." Bakura nodded as he rode off. towards the desert. The tombrobber rode and made it to camp just as the sand storm looked like it was going to start.
" Gather your things men. We have to get back to that shop. There's a sandstorm coming this way and the shopkeeper is lending us some space. Saddle up and let's go." He said helpping gather their stuff. he saddled up just as the sandstorm showed any signs of starting.
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Joey'sCuz: that's it for now. this took me about a month for me to write and a day to type.

Bakura: wow... so what's with me not taking her stuff when I went to get my horse.

Joey'sCuz: don't question me.

Bakura: Why not. I am a master thief.

Joey's Cuz: I am the authoress. You don't argue with the authoress.**zapped Bakura**

bakura: ** appears as himself in a moose suit.** Hey!

Jaoey's Cuz: R&R I don't own the moose suit.

NOW I won't post another chapter until I get 5 comments'.