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The Mysterious Mind of a Poet.
Just a little thing that I write in.
Fading Away.
The story of two lovers, ever at the other's side, 'till the end.
But there came a day when "the end," came far too early.
For she left him one day, with a note that merely said she couldn't stay.
So he waited for her to return, second after second, minute by minute.
But those minutes turned into hours and days,
then the days into weeks and months,
and the months into years.
Every year by sad year he waited for her while he faded into nothing.
He faded 'till he was but a shadow of his former self,
just hoping agaisnt hope that his love would return.
He faded into memories,
into the past,
into nothing.
His love had returned, old and frail.
But she wished to be with him still,
and the vicious cycle began,
as the seconds turned to minutes,
minutes to hours,
hours to days,
days to weeks,
weeks to months,
and months into years.
Every burning year went by as she faded as well.
But sooner than she knew,
she and her love were together once more,
away from the pain and torment of their lives.
Together to love for eternity.

Bani-san
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  • User Comments: [4]
    Jesti Trositi
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    Wed Jun 17, 2009 @ 06:13am


    surprised ! Xen i love it! very nice very nice. it saddened me then left me feeling contently happy in an odd way. thanks for sharing this ^.^ keep up the writting id like to hear more some other time!


    optimists
    Community Member





    Wed Jun 17, 2009 @ 04:02pm


    In my point of view as a poet, I feel that you have placed much emotion into this poem. Keep up the great work.

    Ok luls, that was my poet side <.<
    Now for my usual side..

    OMFG that was so awesome!


    waterkatninja
    Community Member





    Thu Jun 18, 2009 @ 03:19am


    beautiful heart heart heart heart heart heart heart so much emotions expressed on a piece of paper ^.^


    ii-Shadow-Kitsunebi-ii
    Community Member





    Mon Jun 22, 2009 @ 03:27pm


    crying crying crying omg....this is soo sad, and it got so happy at the end...this is a gr8t creation....ur smart, master crying


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