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Reddest Wine Chap. 1
Reddest Wine


Chapter 1



It was a star filled night, the city of New York was hustling and bustling but the city lights did not hide the stars in the Central Park area. Tonight the park was full of young adults setting up concert stages, telescopes and barbeques. A girl was walking through the grass looking among all the people, she was tall, thin, and beautiful, and her skin was pearly white she glowed against the dark shadows of the trees. Her eyes were the darkest of blues and her hair was the color of red wine. She was wearing a black thin strapped tank top with silver stars embroidered on it, dark wash jeans tucked into high black heeled pirate boots. Hanging on her thin wrist was a dark blue gemmed bracelet with silver trims and along her thin neck laid a black sapphire with a silver trim of a Victorian heart, the chain stringing itself around her neck. Her eyes were darkened by midnight black eye shadow and mascara her lips shined with a red lip-gloss. “God why am I doing this?” she thought as she walked by a group of collage boys cheering and whistling. “Whoa looking good Jacxie!” Ignoring them Jacxie looked around again. There were many types of groups hanging around tonight. “Well the collage exams are over,” She thought, and she kept walking past tons of groups. The cheerleaders waved at Jacxie excitedly as she passed them, the football team called her name and she said hi to every one of the guys. She nodded toward the drama groupies as she reached the pitch dark of the side walk and started to head for the exit of the park. In her pocket vibrated and she pulled out a silver cell phone. “Taylor?” She opened the phone to read the text.


Hiya! Y aren’t u comin over here??

goin to that new club.

U mean J.A.D?

That’s the 1. smile

R u sure I signed us up 4 karaoke?

I’m sure, I’ll see u at All’s party k?

Kk. Lov ya!

Ya 2

Jacxie put her phone back in her pocket and went back to walking she passed more groups that said hi and waved at her as she passed through the park. Up ahead she could see a small group of boys and girls, some girls were throwing themselves at the guys, dido for the guys on some of the girls. It looked like the people they were from a gang because they had one piece of tan clothing with a similar small black sword over a flaming red heart. “That’s different?” As she passed all the members looked at her and smiled, a few of the girls nodded to her like they’ve known each other since they we’re kids. Jacxie thought quickly. “Ok getting-!” She stopped when she looked at who she thought was another member and stood stock still. He was leaning against a tree looking at her, he was tall, red hair darker than Jacxie’s, skin that glowed pale and had dark eyes almost black. He had the same symbol as all the others but he had a black leather jacket, he had dark jeans on covering black tennis shoes. He was absolutely handsome. His and Jacxie’s eyes meet, Jacxie felt a shock, she thought he must of felt it too, but didn’t show it. The two stared into each others eyes for what seemed like a long time, Jacxie took a step towards him seeming to get lost deep in his dark eyes. “Weird he looks so fimliar.” Jacxie thought walking closer to him, all the time he kept staring back at her, his hand twitched as if he wanted to reach for her. Then from behind a hand touched Jacxie shoulder holding her back roughly and Jacxie turned breaking the gaze, and looked at the person who was holding her back by her shoulder. Jacxie got a bit angry. “God what’s your problem buddy!?” He was tall and heavily built, he was lightly tanned with midnight black hair and he had dark gray eyes. He was wearing a white shirt covered by a big gray vest embroidered on the pocket with a woman’s lips kissing a black rose and black jeans and combat boots. Jacxie thought his face was too gentle with his body, she felt the same as she did with the other guy. “He’s familiar too, what the heck!?” She thought and the guy spoke in a deep voice and sexy smile playing across his face. “Baby no need for the anger, such a lady like yourself shouldn’t get so angry?” Jacxie really didn’t minded flirting, she was used to it by now, but what got her was that she could smell a hint of alcohol in his breath and that ticked her off in a bad way, Jacxie turned, lifting his hand of her shoulder. “Loser, I’m so out of here.” She started to walk away but the guy caught her by the waist and pulled her close. “Come on baby, don’t be so mad at me, come on lets go, its going to be worth while.” He said. “He’s way too strong for me to fight off!” Jacxie thought scared but it made her angrier. The guy gripped her wrist and lead her into the trees, Jacxie turned and looked back at the guy who was standing straight he wasn’t leaning on the tree anymore, he was watching her still both looking scared and angry, she mouthed “help me!” He got the message and as Jacxie and the guy disappeared into the dark tree, he followed.

Jacxie turned to see where the guy was taking her it was way to dark for her to see, she wondered how he was able to see. Than a horrible thought popped into her mind. “He has probably done this lots of times!” He was taking her far away from the crowds of people away from the protection of lights. At least eighteen minutes had passed before he stopped in a clearing surrounded by trees, it was dark but the stars showed the layout of the clearing, although Jacxie didn’t have time to look around before she thrown to the ground and pinned down by the guy. Jacxie gasped and tried to move but the guy pinned her harder to the ground “Now baby don’t fight, it won’t hurt, promise.” Those last words made Jacxie freeze, and for the first time she looked up at the guy afraid. And he kissed her hard pressing her head down into the soft grass, Jacxie knew if she fight he would be able to stop her, so she just lied here as he kissed her harder sticking his tongue hungrily in her mouth. He felt her surrender under him, and moved one of his hands down her body and hugged her waist against his and pressed his other hand against the ground next to Jacxie’s head, Jacxie just stayed limbed. It was like that for what seemed forever as the guy kept kissing her, felling every bit of her. During this time Jacxie tried to figure out why he was so familiar, she knew he wasn’t from New York but she was sure she met him before “Did I meet him in a past life, that’s a good possibility?” She knew that was wrong too she couldn’t think of how she would have met him and not remember him. He had stopped kissing her lips and had moved down to her neck. Jacxie felt his teeth pinch the skin and gasped. He leaned back the moon light shining on his face a playful smile showed, and Jacxie gasped as she saw his canines, they were long and slightly curved.

Like a vampires.

Jacxie tried to move away but he pinned her down again, she tried to scream but the guy put his hand over Jacxie’s mouth. “Please don’t scream, and don’t worry I don’t want kill you Jacxie.” Jacxie eyes widened more in shock then fear. “H-how did you know who I was?” He looked at her for a long time seeming to want to tell her. “I’ll tell you when you wake up ok, I think you can wait a few more hours.” And with a touch of his hand on her cheek Jacxie closed her eyes and fell into a deep sleep.



A terrified scream escaping from her lips.

-Jacxie-NYC-
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  • User Comments: [9]
    Koneko Akuamarin
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    Thu Mar 05, 2009 @ 08:38pm


    this is a good start. u might want to use different words that use more explantion. i wish to read more on this ^ _ ^


    JadeGoRawr
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    Sat Mar 14, 2009 @ 02:24am


    that is a very good story keep it up blaugh blaugh


    FLCL Haruko101
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    Sat Mar 14, 2009 @ 09:00pm


    awsome just awsome great story biggrin biggrin 4laugh 4laugh


    Queen Blondie
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    Thu Mar 19, 2009 @ 12:52am


    Write more god dammit!


    gwendolyn000001
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    Tue Mar 31, 2009 @ 04:45pm


    Gimme MOREEEE!!!!


    wicked666juggalo420
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    Fri Apr 10, 2009 @ 04:27am


    i liked it it was really good


    melly spilled blood
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    Fri May 01, 2009 @ 05:34am


    niceee i likes it so far smile


    TheGrandMentor
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    Sun May 03, 2009 @ 01:28am


    Oh my ******** God! This is really good!


    Killadolly
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    Sun Jun 28, 2009 @ 06:55am


    MOOOOOOORE! heart heart heart Wai, you do have some.ill go read it


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