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	Rachael's Journal Poems and Random Thoughts
	Rachael's Journal Poems and Random Thoughts

	Locked Inside
	Locked Inside


Don't hurt me now that I'm open and you are able to see I'm not that tough in there more fragile than I look you must really care to see me past my book As hard as I tried as hard as I faught you prod and you pryed and when you were in I was caught Now that you've seen the real me the girl I try to hide you must protect what you see Because I have dangerous things inside 1 like no other · Tue Feb 24, 2009 @ 12:48am · 1 Comments


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Wed Jul 08, 2009 @ 02:52am

A few spelling mistakes.
Ending problems again.
I feel as if you end it abruptly.
You might want to consider reworking that ending.
I like it all until the very last line.

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