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Doubt thou the stars are fire,
Doubt thou the sun doth move,
Doubt truth to be a liar,
But never doubt

-from Opheliac by Emilie Autumn
Where did I go wrong?
Sunny days
Picnic plays
A stolen kiss
Behing the shed
"Shh don't tell!"

(shh dont tell)

where did I go wrong? what did i do?
to keep me away from you?
you turn your back and won't say hi.
this coldness that i feel. i havent had to deal,
with many times before.

A sidelong glance
Whispered words
A few wrong chords
Ignored chores

(ignored chores)

where did i go wrong? what did i do?
to keep me away from you:
i would've run away for you, had you asked me.
i did what you said, except for bed.
and yet you turn away.
this coldness that i feel, i haven't had to deal,
with many times before

Angry shouts
Many clouts
Tears shed while,
Hid away in the dark
Forgiveness hasn't come

(forgiveness hasn't come)

where did i go wrong? what did i do?
to keep me away from you?
the fights we had, we'd always
kiss and make up. why.
what was different this time?
one word too many, now alone i weep
this coldness that i feel, i haven't had to deal
with many times before

Calls made
Words bade
A note passed
No forgiveness here

(no forgiveness here)

where did i go wrong? you turn your back
and won't say hi.
what did i do? to keep me away from you?
this coldness that i feel, i havent had to deal
with many times before
where did i go wrong?

(where did i go wrong?)


Marickson
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  • User Comments: [2]
    Marickson
    Community Member





    Thu May 01, 2008 @ 04:01am


    this particular poem was written lyk a song. the parenthesis are to show words spoken in a whisper behind the music, whatever that may be.


    Sweetart07
    Community Member





    Thu Jun 05, 2008 @ 05:16pm


    theres only one word for that: damn...


    User Comments: [2]
     
     
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