It's a lovely day in the neighborhood.... what am i suppose to put here again?
What??? O.o
Repressed by my own heartfelt objections, like seeing through an opaque glass, I return to the memories of yesterday, to find my own regrets so openly displayed, upon a pedestal of black depression, glistening with my own obsession, tarnished with the pain of regret, deep enough to drown out the cries, of my last hope filled dream.
I love it! I don't quiet understand the last line... but I don't really know anybody at the end of their mortal coil... so that part I don't get but the rest I understand completely and it's so wonderful! ^_^ biggrin
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NinjaPrankster · Community Member · Wed Feb 27, 2008 @ 08:16am
Ooooh! I likes that! The last line makes much more sense now! ^_^ And it really brought the rest of the poem together really well! ^_^
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NinjaPrankster · Community Member · Mon Mar 03, 2008 @ 05:22am