when all is lost, and unforgiven we wonder what has driven, us apart from who we wence were it all seemed to not occur, to us in our heads we end up breaking the threads, that held us together for so long now it all seems wrong, days past we'll never last, unless we get through this together
Awesome poem! biggrin Even if it IS a bit dark. Nothign wrong with dark poetry, though. it's usually the bestest. ^^ HAPPY DAY BEFORE DAY BEFORE DAY BEFORE VALENTINE'S DAY!! *glomps you* heartheartheartheart
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-Her Babbit- · Community Member · Tue Feb 12, 2008 @ 02:14am
YAY! Happy day before day before Valentines day to yoush too!! =D Dark poetry is normally the bestest...it all depends on what people like and how the writer writes =D heartheartheartheart
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Othello_ollehtO · Community Member · Wed Feb 13, 2008 @ 12:10am