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Demonic Battlefield:Chapter 5:Old friends and a new rival?
"Hello there Jason I'm Ally."said Ally shaking his hand. "Nice to meet you."replied Jason. Together the four of them entered the forest hoping to find Cameron's little brother Taz. Cameron sighed remembering how he used to play with his little brother and how is little brother was scared of the forest. Now someone or something had taken his little brother away from him and whatever he or she was. He would defeat it for his brother. "Cameron who do you have as enemys besides demons?"asked Serena. "Um, well there is one man. His name is Garon. He was my best friend in high school until Ally dumped him for me. Then he became my worst enemy. He swore someday he'd get revenge on me."Cameron sighed looking at Ally and still thinking she was beautiful even though she was his ex. They all walked together but then they noticed a wolf demon sitting at a tree at the edge of the forest, next to a hotspring. They approached her and Serena went all the way and asked her if she had seen a little boy about the age of eight. "No, but I wouldn't hang around humans. There dangerous, virously, and evil."said Daceria. (Suprised aren't you?) Daceria was a half wolf half human who didn't trust no one no how no way no matter what. She looked at Serena and saw the glare that she was falling in love with the mortal Cameron. Daceria shook her head, muttered something and disappeared. Serena stood there shocked she didn't know any demon could do that. Serena turned around and the Cameron and the others were standing there with their mouths wide open." How could a demon?" asked Jason and Ally. Cameron answered. "She's no ordinary half demon. She is a princess I saw the enchanted scroll on her belt. I really wish she would have joined us. She would have been a really great defense against hunters. " They turned right and contiued to walk further. They stopped for a minute then walked again. They went through a small village. Cameron noticed guards at the new entrance of the forest. There was no way Serena would get past them with her being a demon. Cameron had an idea. He whispered his idea to Serena and Serena agreed. Cameron was surprised at this, so Serena turned full fox and Cameron lifted her over his shoulders and Serena didn't move. She was pretending she was dead. At the gate of the guards regonized Cameron. "Hey bud, catch another one?"said Ralph. "Yes she was quite hard to catch though. The foxes are putting up more of a fight these days." "Yeah well you better get going. I see your still with Ally." Ralph said. They walked on just agreeing with that. Once out of sight Serena transformed as Cameron let her down. She looked up in his bright eyes and wanted to tell him, wanted to show him what she was feeling within. She kept it hidden. She went over and hugged Jason. "Well let's go". They turned to walk on and noticed the other guard had followed them. "Cameron really protecting a demon. Still dating Ally my love not yours!"Garon said. Camero and Garon were about to fight. They looked at each other this would be a demon hunters battle. But what would Cameron win, he wasn't dating Ally, but he was liking Serena more and more. So they braced themselves for the fight of a lifetime between best friends who were now rivals.

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  • User Comments: [4]
    Katu Khan
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    Mon Oct 01, 2007 @ 01:29am


    Hmm, nice.

    Adding, there is a little more work to be done on your story. I hope that you are doing well with them.


    mina352
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    Sat Oct 06, 2007 @ 12:03am


    There needs to be paragraphs.


    Tonarimo
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    Wed Oct 17, 2007 @ 03:28am


    Your story is great ! ^.^ I can't wait to read more! ^.^


    Katu Khan
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    Wed Oct 31, 2007 @ 01:48am


    ow, umm, hmm...This is nice when I take a few more perusals at it...


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