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Poem by me: The Rain in my Palm
The rain in my palm symbolizes the feel that I am so hungry for yet I dont know if it's real. The rain in my palm represents the tears I have cried, the tears I will one day shed, and the blood held when I found my only love dead. The rain in my palm is my portal to life the thing that makes me put up a fight. The moment I release the rain my life will lose all it's pain. So I look at the rain in my palm and began to let go. But for some reason only tears come out of my eyes and rain begans to fall from the skies. The rain in my palm only grows. I only feel the pains in my past giving a passionate kiss to my lover not knowing it would be the last. Seeing him laying lifelessly but still seemingly crying out for me. Holding his hand and slowly taking off my wedding ban. Handing it to him as though he could recieve it. Telling my self he isnt dead there's no way I could belive it. Holding him close as the blood falls into my hands. The rain has stopped it's time to let go. I let go slowly and the rain falls out...all that pain where does it go? Will I ever know? I open my eyes and I see I was only dreaming, but for some reason I feel the urge to write. It started off as...the rain in my palm...


-♥-Cela



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User Comments: [4]
iice_babii
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Sat Aug 04, 2007 @ 02:03am


GIRL U RITE GOOOOOD!!! LOL


Threllis
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Wed Aug 08, 2007 @ 08:08pm


Very nice ... rain, like blood sometimes fall in bitterness, sometimes love. are they 1 and the same? idk, but does it really matter? we live, we love, we hurt, we bleed, each in our own way, each in our own time ..lol


Dr3aMiNg_ Of _YoU_2NiT3
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Thu Aug 09, 2007 @ 11:12pm


thank you very much for the comments this was one of the longest poems I have ever written. ^.^


mermaid49
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Sun Aug 19, 2007 @ 02:04am


mommy where r u im scared crying


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