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This is where a header should be. But I was to lazy to think up of anything.
My Senses Are Numb
My senses are numb


“How much to do you love me?” she said to her love
The man stretched out his arms, so much he could catch the closest dove.
“This much,” He said, his voice so soft you could glide.
A car crashed, he jumped out to catch her, and died.

To go a day without his face,
Will only add to the things that I misplace.
To hear everything but his voice,
Will only eliminate my choice.
To go a day without his touch,
Will only loosen realities clutch.
To see him and never speak
Will only leave me to sob and weep.
To never taste the freedom that I feel around him,
Will only leave me on a shackled limb.
To go a day without his sweet aroma,
Will only seal me into this eternal emotionless coma.

Can’t you see,
Without you there can be no “we.”
That without that word all my senses useless.
`Cause every time I do anything there’s something I’ll always miss.

“How much to do you love me?” she said to her love
The man stretched out his arms, so much he could catch the closest dove.
“This much,” He said, his voice so soft you could glide.
A car crashed, he jumped out to catch her, and died.

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  • User Comments: [1]
    i love my girl Almedina
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    Mon Jun 11, 2007 @ 05:11am


    OMG this poem was absolutely AMAZING
    it reminded me of my poem
    DRINKING AND DRIVING (both versions but mostly number one)
    the reason i say this poem is great is b/c the man said he loved her "The man stretched out his arms, so much he could catch the closest dove." that much
    and then he "jumped out to catch her" it just shows that he loved her more than his "streaching of arms" could stretch and to love someone so much to die for is just amazing
    so i suggest you remove this "((I know this poem sucks, just thought about the idea recently, I came up with this piece of crap…))"
    b/c it is NOT a piece of crap its a MASTERPIECE
    AL "THE BOSNIAN"


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