Wolf's Art Book (CG Art Currently)

[Sriean]

By the way alittle about myself. I am a twin. My twin and me both share this account. On Gaia I show myself as wolf, my twin shows herself as Bear. Bear's art may be added.

Current:




UnCritiqued:

Up of my friend, I may have the CG verison up sooner or later



In need help with the CGing on the this one

Scraps:

Protrait

FullBody

please critique them :3  

[Miki Hikari]

Hello!
on the first drawing ( the head) its ear should be moved waaay higher, if you feel on your own face the ear is about the same height as you eyes and nose. Also this is just one of my personal drawing style things but the top lip I would make it indent (between the lip and the nose)just a little bit more and be rounded softer otherwise to me it looks like its puckering out a little bit, I also tend to make the hair bigger, right now it looks kind of thin.

I really like avi art, its cute that shes not just frozen stiff like ive seen so many horrid times but shes actually doing something

Thanks for allowing me to critique some, feel free to stop by my sketchbook I just updated today smile I also have a profile view with short hair, lol.  

[Sriean]

Oh my gosh thank you 8D! You are the first person to actually give me some useful critiques! I'll drop by :3  

[Arachnist]

I did a drawover of the first picture and trying to maintain the person's expression. I hope it helps you!

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/6272/drawoverzs3.png  

[Sriean]

Thank you =D! I will put this to use! I'll go practice on people in the freebies board e.e!