Naruto RP: The Rewritten Story(Accepting profiles)

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Table of Contents:
Intro
Story
Announcements
Rules
Villages
Squads
Rank
Jutsus
Types of Jutsus
Seals
White List/Black List
Pre-Mades
Main Character Profiles
Profile Skeleton
Made-ups
Banners

 

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Intro:
Welcome to this brand new edition of such a long line of Naruto roleplays. This particular rp is much different than all the others because frankly the others aren't exactly well made in different terms. I am the owner of the rp so if i see anything that isnt correct or if someones not following the rules i will report you to the owner of the guild.(I am a ery stricte person when it comes to RP's)
Story:
It is just after Naruto and everyone else just graduated but there are more graduates and more squads. This story shall go along the original story line accept for slight adjustments for the new new characters.

 

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Anouncments:
7/6/07- Under Construction
7/6/07- Accepting Profiles



Rules:
1. Absolutly no cybering.
2.Romance in encoraged (keep it PG-16).
3.Killing allowed as long as you get permission from person controling characters AND the owner of this RP.
4. PM all profile with title "Re-Written" to Lonely Soldier. (and if you do not do this or follow the profile skeleton i will delete the message and not even tell you and let you figure it out that you messed up... and i'm very picky)
5. No Flamming.
6.Absolutly No God Moding
7.No spamming
8.No bumping
9.Any Kages that see anyone breaking the rules shall report them to the owner of the RP by PM.
10.You must be literate or semi-literate.
-use "" when talking
-don't use ** for actions
-use () or [] for OOC

 

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Villages:

Sand:
Kage-
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Stone:
Kage-
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Rain:
Kage-
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Grass:
Kage-
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Waterfall:
Kage-
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Sound:
Kage-
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Leaf:
Kage-The Third Hokage
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Cloud:
Kage-
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Mist:
Kage-
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Moon:
Kage-
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Wolf:
Kage-
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Shadows:
Kage-Kumori
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Ranks:
Acadamey Student
Genin
Chunin
Jonin
Special Jonin
Anbu
Kage
Rogue


Squads:
N/A

 

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Jutsus:
Fire Style
Fire Element; Fire Dragon Missile: Tiger (Comes after Earth Element; Earth Dragon Missile)
Fire Element; Balsam Spread Fire: Rat, Tiger, Dog, Ox, Rabbit, Tiger
Fire Element; Fire Dragon Flame Missile: Rat, Horse, Dragon, Ox, Tiger
Fire Element; Grand Fireball Jutsu: Snake, Tiger, Monkey, Boar, Horse, Tiger
Fire Element; Dragon Fire Technique: Serpent, Dragon, Rabbit, Tiger
Fire Element; Flame Blowing: Snake, Sheep, Monkey, Boar, Horse, Tiger
Fire Element; Toad Oil Fire Bullet: (Toad Must Be Summoned), Snake, Tiger, Monkey, Boar, Horse, Tiger
Fire Element; Phoenix Jutsu: Snake, Tiger, Dog, Ox, Rabbit, Tiger
Fire Element; Phoenix Flower Jutsu: Rat, Riger, Dog, Ox, Rabbit, Tiger
Fire Element; Blazing Fireball Jutsu: Snake, Tiger, Monkey, Board, Horse, Tiger
Fire Element; Flame Dragon Jutsu: Snake, Tiger, Dragon, Rabbit, Tiger
Ice Jutsus
Ice Element; Piercing Dragon Fierce Tiger: Tiger, Semi Tiger (first and third finger up and second and forth finger down), Boar, Dog
Ice Element; Double Black Dragon Blizzard: Serpent, Rat, Dragon, Monkey, Tiger, Dog
Ice Element; One Horned Whale: Tiger, Bird, Horse, Boar, Dog
Ice Element; Rouge Nature Jutsu: Snake, Rabbit, Dog
Ice Element; Black Dragon Blizzard: (clap hands together), Bird, Snake, Monkey, Tiger, Dog
Earth Style
Earth Element; Earth Dragon Missile: Sheep, Horse, Dragon
Earth Element; Earth Landslide: Tiger
Earth Element; Earth Wall: You put your left hand into tiger then your right hand into an ox and put the ox on top of the tiger and that's the seal.
Water Style
Water Element; Water Dragon Bullet: Ox, Tiger, Ox, Tiger
Water Element; Water Wall: Tiger, Serpent, Tiger
Water Element; Water Prison Jutsu: Sheep, Serpent, Tiger, Rabbit, Serpent, Dragon, Rabbit, Bird (Must stick hand in, in order to keep jutsu active)
Water Element; Water Vortex Jutsu: Tiger, Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, Sheep, Boar, Ox, Horse, Monkey, Tiger, Dog, Tiger, Serpent, Tiger, Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, Bird
Water Element; Water Dragon Jutsu: Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, Rat, Boar, Bird, Ox, Horse, Bird, Tiger, Dog, Tiger, Snake, Ox, Sheep, Snake, Pig, Sheep, Ox, Monkey, Bird, Dragon, Ox, Horse, Sheep, Tiger, Snake, Rat, Ox, Monkey, Bird, Rat, Boar, Monkey, Dragon, Bird, Ox, Horse, Sheep, Tiger, Snake, Rat, Monkey, Rabbit, Boar, Dragon, Ox, Rat, Ox, Monkey, Bird, Rat, Boar, Bird
Water Element; Black Rain: Tiger, Snake, Tiger
Other Jutsus
Summoning Jutsu: Boar, Dog, Monkey, Bird, Sheep
Dispell: Horse Tiger
Tile Shuriken: Tiger, Dragon, Rat, Tiger
Hidden Snake Hand: Snake Tiger
Summon Reincarnation to the Impure World: Tiger, Dog, Dragon, (clap hands together)
Summon Dog Pack: Boar, Dog, Tiger, Monkey, Sheep
Demonic Illusion; Hell Decent Jutsu: Boar, Dog, Bird, Monkey, Sheep
Chidori: Ox, (Fingers Spread In Front of You), Rabbit, (Fingers Spread In Front of You), Monkey, (Fingers Spread In Front of You)
Chidori Level 2: Snake, Dragon, Horse, Ram, Bird, Dog, Ox, Rabbit, Monkey
Chidori Level 3: Dog, Ox, Rabbit
Death God Summon: (Cross Fingers), Snake, Boar, Sheep, Rabbit, Dog, Rat, Bird, Horse, Snake, (Clap Hands)
Cursed Seal Jutsu: Rabbit, Bird, Snake, Horse, Monkey, Horse, Sheep, Rat
A Thousand Years of Pain: Tiger, (Jab Fingers Into Target's Rear)
Secret Tree Jutsu: Snake (Without Palms Touching)
Academy Ninja Clone Jutsu: Tiger, Boar, Ox, Dog
Academy Ninja Transformation Jutsu: Dog, Boar, Tiger
Shadow Clone: Ram, Serpent, Tiger
Sakura's CLone Jutsu: Tiger, Ox, Dog
Phoenix Flower Jutsu: Rat, Ox, Tiger, Ox, Rabbit, Tiger
Substitution Jutsu: Tiger, Boar, Ox, Snake
Reversal Jutsu: Dog, Snake, Bird, Tiger
Time Reversal Jutsu: Dog, Snake, Ox, Bird, Tiger

Types of Jutsus:
Ninjutsu- Ninjutsu is the art of making hand seals and kneading chakra to perform a jutsu (technique). When you make the appropriate hand seal, your desired technique comes forth! Performing Ninjutsu techniques require full concentration and if interrupted, it will not work. It only takes a few seconds to successfully execute a Ninjutsu technique. Ninjutsu is probably the most used attack type out of the three main categories.
Genjutsu- Genjutsu techniques are mostly illusionary techniques. These techniques cause the opponent to hallucinate and make them think that they see things that are not really there. Genjutsu type techniques are great to use when you are trying to escape or confuse the opposition. While your opponent is confused, you can attack without them knowing where you are.
Taijutsu- Taijutsu is the hand to hand combat part of a ninjas training. It deals with no handseals and chakra is focused throughout the entire body. Taijutsu attacks deal from a variety of slow to fast movements. They vary depending on the amount of chakra used. As known there are only two hand to hand specialists in Naruto: Gai and Rock Lee.
Hijutsu- Hijutsu techniques are special techniques limited to those who either came from a clan or is the only person that can perform it. Bloodline limits are considered Hijutsu techniques.
Doujutsu- Doujutsu techniques are performed by the eye. It reads Genjutsu, Taijutsu, and Ninjutsu techniques and defeats them. People who perform Doujutsu techniques are usually geniuses. The Sharingan is considered a Doujutsu technique.
Kinjutsu- Kinjutsu techniques are techniques illegal and outlawed by the Kages. Kinjutsu techniques are extremely strong and can cause huge damage. If it is mastered by the wrong person; a whole village could be in severe jeopardy.

Seals:
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Pre-Mades:
Naruto:
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He is the main character of the story. A long time ago a demon fox was sealed inside of him to protect the Village of Konoha. He uses the demon's power to help him fight his opponents. Naruto was treated as an outcast throughout his childhood. He is outgoing and a bit foolish especially around hot girls. Nevertheless he is totally devoted to protecting his friends and people important to him.
Sakura:
The female of the team, she always tries to get Sasuke to notice her. Her "Ultimate Rival" for Sasuke is Yamanaka Ino, a fellow female Shinobi. She is considered weak in Ninjutsu but has very good Genjutsu perception and chakra control.
Sasuke:

The "Ultimate Rival" of Naruto, he is the lone survivor of the Uchiha clan. He is a loner who keeps to himself even though he is in all the attentions of the girls in the Academy. Sasuke has no time to trouble himself with such matters because he has sworn to avenge the brutal murders of his clan. He has the Sharingan, a special trait of the Uchiha clan, which allows him to copy and use other ninjas' Ninjutsu, Genjutsu and sometimes even Taijutsu.
Kakashi:
The Jounin in charge of Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura, he was Leaf Village's only Sharingan user before Sasuke. He is not related to the Uchiha clan and got his Sharingan surgically. He is sometimes called "Copy Ninja" Kakashi because he has copied over 1000 jutsus.
Kiba:
He smells like a dog, looks like a dog, and acts like one. Guess What? He brawls like a dog. But that doesn't mean he isn't strong. His drawbacks are that he is too bossy and impatient but he packs a ton of power. Sometimes he is so arrogant and overconfident that his teammates hate him! His clan specializes in training dogs to fight.
Hinata:
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She is a member of the Head family branch of the Hyuuga Clan. She is very shy and afraid to fight, but she is strong when she does. She has a crush on Naruto, who is too thick-headed to notice. She tries her hardest to change herself. Like Neji, she uses the Byakugan but to a lesser degree of skill.
Shino:
He is the genius of the Aburame clan - which uses bugs as deadly weapons. He is a very quiet person who keeps to himself and doesn't talk often. Shino is tremendously strong and if those bugs get a hold of you, they may kill you.
Kurenai:
She is a rookie Jounin. Nevertheless, she is skilled in Genjutsu attacks. Kurenai is the Jounin in charge of Shino, Kiba and Hinata.
Shikamaru:
He is the sort of person that would rather sleep than work. But once he has promised something, he won't let you down. Shikamaru is extremely smart and has an IQ of over 200! He likes to play shogi (Japanese Chess) and is a brilliant strategist. His whole clan specializes in Shadow techniques.
Ino:
The #1 rival of Sakura for Sasuke, she and Sakura have been fighting over Sasuke since the Academy days. Her whole clan specializes in mind confusing/stealing jutsus. She is the strongest female Genin.
Choji:
This Shinobi's clan specializes in jutsus that make you larger. Choji is fat and likes to eat. He especially likes to eat BBQ. His Baika No Jutsu (Double Weight Technique) is a force not to be reckoned with!
Asuma:
Asuma is only Jounin who smokes. He is a pretty good Jounin, even though he doesn't compare to Gai or Kakashi. He is the Jounin leader of Ino, Shikamaru, and Choji.
3rd Hokage:
He faces off with Orochimaru and eventually dies while fighting him. The battle is long and intense. It ends with some amazing jutsus and Orochimaru getting his hands sealed.
Gaara:
He has a bloodthirsty nature, believing that he exists only to kill people. The Kazekage made him the Sand's ultimate weapon. He has known no love, no compassion - as his own guardian tried to assassinate him when he was six. Tormented about his existence, he found solace in killing people. Gaara has a peculiar "kanji" or Japanese/Chinese symbol on his head signifying love. It's a pun of his name, which means death in Japanese. So his name translates literally as "I love death". Gaara appears from episode 20 and onward.
Temari:
She is Gaara's older sister. She is considered attractive by some. She uses a fan to immobilize weapons and to blow them away. Temari is a pretty smart strategist and can be consider one of the top female Genin. She appears from episode 20 and onward.
Kankuro:
He is Gaara's older brother. Kankuro has peculiar purple marking on his face. The face paint is in the style of Kabuki. (Kabuki: An old style of Japanese play where the actors say not a word but they use dance, music, and craft to perform.) The masks have thick lines of color, highlighting the eyes, around the cheekbones and across the jaw line. This helps to emphasize the emotional responsiveness of the character (often anger). When a Kabuki mask is colored purple it means: sublimity, nobility, and loftiness. Kankuro has a marionette that he uses to battle with, called Karasu. He hates midgets. Kankuro is quite strong, but he is afraid of offending Gaara, as he would kill him. He appears from episode 20 and onward.
Haku:
He is Zabuza's young protégé with very special abilities. This young boy (approximately 16) has an advanced bloodline that allows him many special techniques. Zabuza found him when his father killed. His father killed his mother and had almost killed him. He managed to escape and was found by Zabuza on a bridge while he was looking for food. Zabuza has taught and trained him well to know many techniques, but he was never able to be a true Shinobi. He was killed by protecting Zabuza from Kakashi's "Lighting Edge." He perishes by Kakashi's "Lightning edge" Raikiri attack in episode 19.
Zabuza:
He is a Missing-Nin that was part of an assassination squad in the Mist Village. Zabuza is a specialist in silent killing and water jutsus. He has a young protégé with an advanced bloodline named Haku. Sorely wounded by Kakashi, Zabuza uses what strength left in him to kill Gatou, while having a bunch of weapons thrust into him by Gatou's cronies. Zabuza appears in episodes 7 - 19. Perishes after being stuck in the back by various weapons in episode 19.
Lee:
A Shinobi with no talent whatsoever for Ninjutsu or Genjutsu. So he has to rely on his Taijutsu. Rock Lee is very fast and his Taijutsu is very strong. His rival Neji believes that fate has decided your path. In his philosophy, if you are a dropout, you will stay a dropout. Rock Lee works very hard to try and defeat Neji.
Neji:
The genius from the branch family of the Hyuuga Clan, he has the most talent and ability of the entire clan. But he has a very depressing way of thinking - that you can't change your life or your fate; that your doomed forever in the state you are at now. He inherited the Byakugan from his clan. The Byakugan allows him to have a view of nearly 360 degrees and he detects enemy attacks with it.
Tenten:
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A strong female Shinobi who specializes with weapons. She likes to be around Neji and she has some sort of attraction towards him. She is decent in battle, but once her weapons are nullified she's as good as dead.
Gai:
Kakashi's "Eternal Rival," Gai and Kakashi have fought 99 times. Currently Gai is up by one, the record is 49 to 50. Gai specializes in very strong Taijutsu. But don't take his weird appearance lightly; he is one of the strongest Jounin of Konoha. He is most likely stronger than Kakashi. He is the Jounin in charge of Lee, Neji and Tenten.

 

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Squads:
1. Sensei: -
- Kowashi Mizu
- Rashima Karasen
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2. Sensei:
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Profile Skeleton:

Student Profile:
Gaia Name:
Name: (must have last name unless the person is an orphan)
Gender:
Age: (must be appropriate to rank)
Rank: (must be chunin or lower)
Village:
Personality:
Title: (a genius like Neji or Shino, a shirker like Shikamaru, a failure or freak like Naruto and Lee, etc.)
Clan: (your character's last name)
Hijutsu/Doujutsu: (up to three but must intertwine)
Bio: (at least four sentences)
Three main Jutsus: (may have more but we need favorites)(explain if made-up)
Kinjutsus:
Main type: (taijutsu, genjutsu, ninjutsu)
Weapon: (not kunai or shuriken unless something has been done to it)
Appearance: (must be anime)
Crush:

Sensei Profile:
Gaia Name:
Name: (must have last name unless the person is an orphan)
Gender:
Age: (must be appropriate to rank)
Rank: (must be jonin or higher)
Squad number: (which do you teach... if special jonin who is the specific person you teach)
Village:
Personality:
Title: (such as the Copy Ninja for Kakashi)
Clan: (your character's last name)
Hijutsu/Doujutsu: (up to three but must intertwine)
Bio: (at least four sentences)
Three main Jutsus: (may have more but we need favorites)(explain if made-up)
Kinjutsus:
Main type: (taijutsu, genjutsu, ninjutsu)
Weapon: (not kunai or shuriken unless something has been done to it)
Appearance: (must be anime)
Crush:


Made-Ups:

Gaia Name: xXLonelySodierXx
Name: Kowashi Mizu
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Rank: Chunin
Village: Konaha
Personality: Hyper, lack of common sence(sometimes),never annoyed
Clan: Mizu
Hijutsu/Doujutsu: unknown at the moment
Bio: Kowashi is an older form of Naruto but has no demon within him. Kowashi is still trying to perfect most of his jutsus. When his squad entered the chunin exams he and his his best friend were both able to pass and ended up fighting one another in the final match. At the end it was a draw and they were both claimed the victors of the tourney.
Three main Jutsus:
Razephon- twice the strength of Rasengan but is instead of blue it is black
Clone Jutsu
Shadow Shuriken Technique
Kinjutsus:
Contract to the Void- Is a black sphere like Razephon but it sucks the enemy from the inside out.
Contract to the Abyss- Is also a black sphere and it blows a whole through the enemy.
Main type: ninjutsu
Weapon: Katana
Apperance:

Gaia Name: Dudekeith0061
Name: Rashima Karasen
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Rank: Chunin
Village: Grass Village
Personality: Friendly, Quiet, and is never distracted
Clan: Karasen
Hijutsu/Doujutsu: unknown for now
Bio: Rashima is like an older Sasuke but is more friendly and doesnt have the Sharingan. Rashima trains hard to try and become a Hokage and protect the village and sometimes gets in arguements with Naruto. His Squad went to the Chunin exams and he was the only one able to pass and ended up winning. He waits for the day his team members pass
Three main Jutsus:
Rasengan Bomb- Puts a lot of chakra into a Rasengan and throws it at the enemy which explodes and deals damage to the enemy
Shadow clone jutsu
Rasengan
Kinjutsus:
Rasengan Barrage- Makes a rasengan and throwsit at the enemy and controls it to strike the enemy repeatedly
Rashima Karasen Combo- Summons Shadow clones and all attack at once and finishes off with a drop kick
Main type: Ninjutsu
Weapon: Bowstaff with chakra in it so if he throws it he can call it back
Appearance:
Crush: Ino


Kage Profile

Gaia Name: Kumori-dono

Name: Kumori (orphan)

Gender: Male

Age: 25

Rank: Kage

Squad number: [don't know what to put as Kage]

Village: Shadows

Personality: Quiet, Withdrawn

Title: The Living Shadow

Clan: Unknown [Might reveal in a plot twist during RP]

Hijutsu/Doujutsu: Can travel through shadows. i.e. appear by rising out of someone's shadow, even though they are a good distance away

Bio: An orphan who grew up in the Hidden Villages of Konoha (Leaves). He was an exceptional student who many considered to be the only rival to Itachi Uchiha at the Acadamy and whilst training as Gennin right through the Chunin exams, and also considered to be one of the few members of the Anbu Black Ops with as high a mission success rate. When he reached the age of 18 he felt like he was restrained where he was. He wanted to start a new Village. So he made a deal with the Hokage at the time that he would leave overseas to start a new settlement, and this new village would become an ally of Konoha. Eventually Kumori reached land and travelled far. He had hoped to build his town in the Void Country. He accidentally built it within the Demon Country, near the border. When he learned this he made no effort to change this. He did not feel threatened by his location. And he began to rule in relative peace.

Three main Jutsus: Shadow Possession, Chakra Veil [hides chakra & chakra levels meaning he can't be sensed] & Eternal Darkness [Shadow Equivelent of gaara's sand coffin]

Kinjutsus: Knows them all as a Kage but has vowed never to use them, even in war

Main type: Ninjutsu

Weapon: Katana

Appearance: [erm, i can't find any anime pictures that look anything like my character, the best i can do is a Gaia avi, unless you have an alternative suggestion]

 

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