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 Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 3:01 pm
"Eternal Sleep"
I only wish to fall asleep and dream away the world,
To sleep forever endlessly and see my hopes unfurled,
I want to sink into those depths, sink into that dark place,
Where between sleeping and awake, I lie in Dream's embrace,
I never want to wake again, I never want to see,
That bright dull world where nothing's right, where no one can be free,
If I could have one wish granted, I know what I would say,
To sleep away from everything, that's how I want to stay.
There's another copy of this posted on my Myspace, along with several other poems. myspace.com/ryoumon
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 3:02 pm
"Dragon's Heart"
In the shadows you can hide, for darkness feels no pain,
Surrounded by the mirror's lie, and scarlet drops of rain,
Cracked reflections all around, each shows a different face,
Their voices scream without a sound, while madness moves in place,
Dragon's Heart, don't leave me here,
Dragon's Heart, consumed by fear,
From the window moonlight flows, like blinding silver stream,
The mirror's pieces glint like blades, you pray this is a dream,
Demon voices fill your head, you can't escape their rage,
Now all alone your courage fails, your body's now your cage,
Dragon's Heart, don't leave me here,
Dragon's Heart, consumed by fear,
Dragon's Heart, we cannot flee,
Dragon's Heart, stay here with me...
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 9:49 am
"Angel and Demon"
Lurker in the shadows, and keeper of the light,
One who shows me love, and one who gives me fright,
You who holds me down, you who lends me flight,
Crying in this cage, lead me into the night,
Your eyes hold Heaven's love, you wander through my mind,
But he who hides in darkness, will always walk behind.
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 10:11 pm
I haven't read these yet...these are awesome....ofcource I love all your writings so yea...but anyway...amazing bro!
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 9:22 am
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 10:10 am
Thankies! I need to write some new ones soon, instead of posting my old work.
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 3:16 pm
Ryoumon Thankies! I need to write some new ones soon, instead of posting my old work. Yea...but all the stuff u write is good so...yea...anyway...u do need to post more...for the readers benefit
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 11:58 pm
You are amazingly talented. It's to bad though that unlike in the past, good poets don't get much attention. You are way better than Robert Frost and any of those old guys and deserve a lot of recognition for your work. Society blends everyone into the backgrounds these days.
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 8:00 pm
Fires_Blaze You are amazingly talented. It's to bad though that unlike in the past, good poets don't get much attention. You are way better than Robert Frost and any of those old guys and deserve a lot of recognition for your work. Society blends everyone into the backgrounds these days.
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 5:16 pm
Fires_Blaze You are amazingly talented. It's to bad though that unlike in the past, good poets don't get much attention. You are way better than Robert Frost and any of those old guys and deserve a lot of recognition for your work. Society blends everyone into the backgrounds these days.
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 4:41 pm
They're very unusual, but definitely interesting.
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Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 5:38 am
Ryoumon Fires_Blaze You are amazingly talented. It's to bad though that unlike in the past, good poets don't get much attention. You are way better than Robert Frost and any of those old guys and deserve a lot of recognition for your work. Society blends everyone into the backgrounds these days. You sell yourself short. There are more things that are great about your poem than you think. It's structure for one. To be able to rhyme words that don't throw off the mood of the poem is a big part of it. You actually took a little time to think through this. By the way, with my first poem, the "Try it again and I'll make you pay," throws off the mood of it. You don't have to compliment mine because I complimented yours. Your is a lot better than you think.
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Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 3:20 pm
Fires_Blaze Ryoumon Fires_Blaze You are amazingly talented. It's to bad though that unlike in the past, good poets don't get much attention. You are way better than Robert Frost and any of those old guys and deserve a lot of recognition for your work. Society blends everyone into the backgrounds these days. You sell yourself short. There are more things that are great about your poem than you think. It's structure for one. To be able to rhyme words that don't throw off the mood of the poem is a big part of it. You actually took a little time to think through this. By the way, with my first poem, the "Try it again and I'll make you pay," throws off the mood of it. You don't have to compliment mine because I complimented yours. Your is a lot better than you think.
I did take time to think them through, and I wanted them to have a sort of rhythm. If you liked them, you should go to my Myspace Blog. Do you have a Myspace? NEW POEM BELOW...
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Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 3:52 pm
"That World"
It's hard to sleep at night,
It's difficult to talk,
The only thing that I can do,
Is trace their World with chalk,
Long nights I lie awake,
With nothing left in me,
But sometimes I slip into dreams,
The Digi-World I see,
That world filled with strange things,
Gabumon at my side,
But then I wake up in my bed,
My dreams cannot have lied...
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Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 3:39 pm
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee exclaim exclaim exclaim
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