[Po] A Small Sin

[anne_t_cats]

What is it
That I have to do?
To redeam my place
beside you God?
What is it that
I have done to
Show that I don't
Belive in you?
Is it who I am?
What I have done?

I may have made
A small sin
Here and there
but why do you
leave me here
to decay?

To Decay in
My thoughts
of unhappynes.
Of pain and
suffering.

I may have
Made a small
Sin.
But, God,
I am a strong
Beliver
and
I only wish
that you sould see
Past the
Small Sin's that I have
Made that have
Angered you.

 

[peacemaker83105]

I liked it, a few spelling errors but how hasn't you know?  

[anne_t_cats]

peacemaker83105

I liked it, a few spelling errors but how hasn't you know?

How hasn't? That doesn't make any sence.  

[Ransom3d]

Nice, except with a few spelling mistakes >< I would give it a 93%. Maybe it could've rhymed 3nodding  

[Fushigi na Butterfly]

It's not bad. There are some grammar/spelling errors, and I think it would have been better to continue on with the answer to the question. I like how it's kinda like a prayer. 3nodding