Kaxen's Art (new art posted)

[Kaxen]

Can I get some crits on this?

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/50648778/

I was trying to do more line weight than I usually do, but it kind of looks nonexistent... sweatdrop

Crits on the female figure would be helpful too. I have a hard time getting crits on girls, usually develops into arguments about what an acceptable cup size ought to be.  

[Wispered]

Hey Kaxen ^_^ Glad to see more stuff from you.

Two things I want to mention. The hands are -really- small. Its a common mistake to make. Most people are afraid of making the hands too big, but honestly you can make them a bit too big and get away with it easier than making them a bit too small.
The other is that her other breast disappeard. If the profile one can affect the material that much then there should be an indication of the other breast. Most likely a hint of even just shadow under where it would be.  

[aliira]

um, im really not that good at critiques

i think the lineart looks good
i agree with what eejbeej said, maybe shading in another breast would give the pic more depth

and i think that the character gets alittle lost in the bg, maybe make the colors more suttle or put the character in an environment

overall i think the pic looks good  

[Kaxen]

I made the hands a little large and shaded her clothes some more.

 

[Kaxen]

Need some help on this one... I have more than an inkling that the lighting is incredibly wacky...

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/51687709/  

[Wispered]

Spiffy! The thing with the lighting that stood out to me is there's almost no contrast on the skin or the hair. The clothing has high contrast and with your lightings thats good, just try to do the same to the skin and hair
My only other crit is watch the length of the fingers compared to the palm. Otherwise, spiffy. Hope that helped a bit ^_^