With every step you take you walk closer to your end.

[Bluuberry]

With every step you take you walk closer to your end.
Wether it will be gracefull or quietly, everyone is gonna die.
Understand the syndrome of dieing and living, choosing your words or tossing hate to oneother.
Fill your world with love of all, crown yourself king of your world.
Abolish all those who oppose you, take power for you to use.
Die easily, die screaming, die fighting, die fleeing.
Forget the god who binds you, live with ease in your heart of a undetermined but certain end.
Live to the end knowing it is the end, one day you'll wake up dead.
And then you'll have absolute freedom, by loosing all you gain all.
No longer restrained by the laws of the living, yet unable to move.
Death is a cruel thing. Man tries to understand the cruelness of him, creates a god in his image. Giving that god the power over death, they are foolish to think Death listens to anyone.

I have no clue whatsoever why I just wrote that.  

[Xia Momo Capernicus]

Was that morbid poetry, or deep philisophical thinking, or random words slapped together to sound cool? eek

Whatever it is, I like it ^.~

 

[Heterosexual Fa gg ot]

MMM Death, very good with Ranch sauce.

[.Julie Booly.]

 

[Veinlash]

Bluuberry

With every step you take you walk closer to your end.
Wether it will be gracefull or quietly, everyone is gonna die.
Understand the syndrome of dieing and living, choosing your words or tossing hate to oneother.
Fill your world with love of all, crown yourself king of your world.
Abolish all those who oppose you, take power for you to use.
Die easily, die screaming, die fighting, die fleeing.
Forget the god who binds you, live with ease in your heart of a undetermined but certain end.
Live to the end knowing it is the end, one day you'll wake up dead.
And then you'll have absolute freedom, by loosing all you gain all.
No longer restrained by the laws of the living, yet unable to move.
Death is a cruel thing. Man tries to understand the cruelness of him, creates a god in his image. Giving that god the power over death, they are foolish to think Death listens to anyone.

I have no clue whatsoever why I just wrote that.

did u get sumwhere or did u make that up?
its pretty good  

[Marxist-Sloth]

Death is nothing to us.

Your poem doesn't sound very atheistic to me, all this talk of inner peace and freedom really invokes levels of pure frustration in me.

I'm fairly sure your harboring an image of death as being a sweet release, your dead, nothing more, nothing less.  

[alpha male tayo]

I think that there is so much potential performace gain with more peaceful systems that they should be banned, before someone spends a ton of money developing religion and everyone else has to spend money to catch up.  

[Kuakuu]

I like it~