Writers, Poets and Critics: Come On In!

[Ceveo]

I made a request for this Seeker so no bashing. This is a creative writing thread you can put full or summerized versions of your stories or post poems. I say critics can come cause we all need some critisizim or it ends up sucking. Manga creators are free to post here too so go ahead do it.  

[violet faerie]

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[omiko]

Wow! VERY nice! and deep too.... 3nodding I like painting...  

[AnimeSeeker7]

i like it too1
and i don't care if my manga is good or bad..at least it's getting published...go VIZ!  

[Tsuki Miyamoto]

Wow~! VF~! Those are really good~!

XD, my poems: suck butt O;. But I'll post one up, X3.

I'll Never Love Another

I'll never love another,
I'll keep on waiting for you.
I'll never love another,
'Cos I know our love is true.
I'll never love another,
No matter that he loves me.
I'll never love another,
'Cos I love you...can't you see?
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Umm I wrote that in December? xD I have more poems, but I don't remember anything but this one XD. If I write any more maybe I'll post them...

 

[violet faerie]

Tsuki Miyamoto

Wow~! VF~! Those are really good~!

XD, my poems: suck butt O;. But I'll post one up, X3.

I'll Never Love Another

I'll never love another,
I'll keep on waiting for you.
I'll never love another,
'Cos I know our love is true.
I'll never love another,
No matter that he loves me.
I'll never love another,
'Cos I love you...can't you see?
-
Umm I wrote that in December? xD I have more poems, but I don't remember anything but this one XD. If I write any more maybe I'll post them...

Thank you ^^

I wuv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm gonna use to send to someone on Valentine's Day that I hate ^^ j/k that was sooooooooo sweet ^^ Yesh post more and more 3nodding  

[Ceveo]

AnimeSeeker7

i like it too1
and i don't care if my manga is good or bad..at least it's getting published...go VIZ!

Wait Seriously Viz is publishing your Manga?  

[Ceveo]

This was an unusual one. I wrote it for someone. They wanted a story of some sort. So I just made this and gave it to them...they seemed to like it.

I never really titled it:

Some thing in me has finally died
My soul came out and took it's leave
Though love I try
I still don't find
The person out there ment for me.

A moment there I thought I saw
Someone who I could truly love
It wasn't long
till she was gone
It doesn't work she said to me

I slowly dropping out of time
My heart is dead my mind asleep
Where do I go
I do not know
Perhaps life is not ment for me

I'm in a room all bound and gagged.
So that no one can hear me scream
The knife impales
And I exhale
As my whole world just drains from me

I'm not so sure where I am now
An akward feeling in my skin
I smile wide
to every side
This must be just how death must feel  

[Viva la Courtney]

Wow... I really like it Yoshaki-chan! Do you mind if I save it? ((I also need to find a nickname for you~))  

[Ceveo]

Cami_Kaminari

Wow... I really like it Yoshaki-chan! Do you mind if I save it? ((I also need to find a nickname for you~))

No not at all. Go right ahead. Must refrain from trying anything. ninja  

[Viva la Courtney]

Yoshaki

Cami_Kaminari

Wow... I really like it Yoshaki-chan! Do you mind if I save it? ((I also need to find a nickname for you~))

No not at all. Go right ahead. Must refrain from trying anything. ninja

*laughs* Trying something? Like what? xd  

[AnimeSeeker7]

Yoshaki

AnimeSeeker7

i like it too1
and i don't care if my manga is good or bad..at least it's getting published...go VIZ!

Wait Seriously Viz is publishing your Manga?

well..they said maybe..if i can finish the 1st voulme by the end of this year..and then start on teh 2nd right away...  

[Tsuki Miyamoto]

violet_faerie

Tsuki Miyamoto

Wow~! VF~! Those are really good~!

XD, my poems: suck butt O;. But I'll post one up, X3.

I'll Never Love Another

I'll never love another,
I'll keep on waiting for you.
I'll never love another,
'Cos I know our love is true.
I'll never love another,
No matter that he loves me.
I'll never love another,
'Cos I love you...can't you see?
-
Umm I wrote that in December? xD I have more poems, but I don't remember anything but this one XD. If I write any more maybe I'll post them...

Thank you ^^

I wuv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm gonna use to send to someone on Valentine's Day that I hate ^^ j/k that was sooooooooo sweet ^^ Yesh post more and more 3nodding

XD Sankyuu ~ I'll post more sometime soon (=

 

[violet faerie]

+Dr. Faust+

This the most recent poem I've had publised. It'll be in a book of poetry called the, Labours of Love from Noble House publishing of London, New York, and Paris. sweatdrop whee

Memory? ~ by William(me)

Do you remember all those games that we use to play?
But we all grow up and our memories fade.

Do you remember all those warm, sunny summer days?
But time flys by and our memories fade.

Do you remember all those things that we use to say?
And all the good times before our memories fade.

I remember when you said that you couldn't stay.
But hearts grow apart and our memories fade.

I remember when we both went our seperate ways.
But with every other step our memories fade.

I remember how we just let it slip away.
And how we couldn't look back so our memories would fade.

Will we ever wake up to a brighter day?
And as our eyes slowly open our memories fade.

Let me know what you think. Although it's too late to change anything the book will be out in the fall. 3nodding

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wuv it heart (not just saying that cuz i'm a fangirl either) The nostalgic way it was written was very touching!!!! The sad part is my memory is already fading confused sweatdrop But now that i know its being published I shall be at the bookstore demanding that book if they have it, and if they dont twisted I shall get it blaugh 3nodding