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Posted: Sun Oct 06, 2013 3:48 pm
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AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM
Name: Wynter North Nicknames: Nort, Wyn, Bumble, Chill, Snowie, Abominable Snowdude. Gender: Male Age: 16 Faction: Monster Race: Yeti Natural Ability: Causing snowstorms or Shape shift to Yeti.
Personality: Wynter is an easy going kinda of guy. He enjoys spending most of his days in cold places as he tends to loathe overly hot areas. The only thing he doesn't mind that requires body heat is hugging and cuddles! Don't let his size fool you! He is a big ol' softy at heart--think the gentle giant! Other things he likes besides some lovin' is shiny things as it reminds him of ice and crystals. He tends to collect shiny objects and place them all around his living space.
History: Up until the age of 16 years old Wynter had been happily living with his parents in their new home. The reason it was new was because they tended to move around a lot due to hunters wanting their horns for medicine--how silly was that!--and their fur was supposedly used to keep their fleshy-selves warm. One night he was sat down by both his parents to have a talk about his future. Turns out he was being pushed by his parents to be more independent. They were both old fashion in the aspect of: one needed to provide for themselves in order to be a better monster/person. So Wynter had left his snowhome to find out what future had in store for him. It had all been going well for about a week when...
Wynter woke up in raging snowstorm going on outside an icy cave. Judging from the situation that occurred that day, he could only assume an icicle had fallen and knocked him on the noggin. The only thing that kept him going was the possibility of getting into Amityville Academy and his chances of monster-y success~
Likes: - cuddles - snow - fluffy things - You! - Shiny things - small animals/collecting animals - sweet food/treats
Dislikes: - HOT DAYS - Over Heating - abuse - hunters (he can put up with them but >_> he would prefer not too)
Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy? Wynter's reason is to be around others. To interact with more species or humans. From what he can recall pre-bump was that his parents deemed--"all creatures great and small are the enemy. They only want one thing: to murder our kind." Which honestly he had a hard time believing and thought was a bit on the paranoid side. Another aspect of enrollment is to try to become more accustomed to heat--slowly, very slow steps; baby steps even! Also the idea of running into other Yeti or Abdominal Snow is appealing to him.
FEAR Ability: The Chill: When Wynter uses this technique he tends to bring up his fear of hunters. Another aspect of using his fear ability is the thought of loosing someone important to him. To him the thought of a friend or family member is horrific. Wynter would rather take the damage then see those close to him in pain.
Physical Description: Height: 6ft weight: 225 Eye Colour: Icy Blue Hair Colour/Style: Colour: White Style: Wind blown, wild, unkept. Skin Colour: White. Clothing Style/Colours: - Furry shoulder pads - White leather jacket - white fluffy chest hair - white leather pants Hands: - grey nails that are lightly tipped Other: - Grey horns on top of this head - bare feet with grey claws/nails (same colour as fingernails) Accessories: - shiny things! like crystal jewelry in his hair or bling. - something cute? like a fluffy plushie or small animal that could survive in cold weather.
References: see first post.
Plot Ideas:
Songs: North's Playlist: 1. Red Hot Chili Peppers- Snow 2. LIGHTS- Ice 3. Linkin Park- Castle of Glass 4. What if the Storm Ends- Snow Patrol 5. Limp- Behind Blue Eyes (for angsty timz) 6. LIGHTS- White 7. Coldplay- Paradise 8. Peter, Bjorn and John- Second Chance 9. M & S- The Cave 10. Go Radio- Goodnight Moon 11. Ellie Goulding- Lights 12. Let it Snow- Dean Martin Pin:
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Posted: Sun Oct 06, 2013 4:00 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 06, 2013 4:29 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2013 2:49 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2013 2:51 pm
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Posted: Sat Oct 12, 2013 9:51 am
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Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2013 12:05 pm
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Hello! biggrin You requested crit so I am here to give it~!
The first thing that jumped out at me was actually what Blade said, haha. No need to make him a were, he could be a straight-up Yeti and that'd be totally fine!
As for his natural ability, if he's a normal yeti he can actually just shift in-out of natural form based on if he's wearing his skull pin or not, which would remove the need for you to take shapeshifting as a natural ability - you could put something else in there instead! (Of course, that would mean that if he's in a situation where the skull pin is mandatory he would be 'stuck' in student form, so choose wisely.)
Also, just to make absolutely sure - by 'hunters' in your description you mean like... people who hunt, not Deus Ex Machina Hunters, right? Because ordinary citizens of Halloween generally don't know about Hunters except as silly stories parents tell their kids to make them eat their vegetables or whatever. I'm pretty sure you didn't mean Deus hunters but just to be sure. C:
One other thing - his history. There is nothing wrong with it as it stands, it would be approved - but! I'm not really sure why the memory loss is needed. He can want to seek out others and that combined with the independence push from his parents could easily be a motivation for him to go to Amityville, no memory loss needed. If you like it as is that's fine, you don't need to change it, but I'd encourage you to think about making his trip to Amityville an active choice on his part, not just the only confused option he has. Active choices make for interesting storytelling. biggrin
I hope this was helpful! Feel free to ping or PM me about anything~ C:
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Posted: Thu Oct 31, 2013 11:13 am
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Posted: Mon Feb 10, 2014 12:33 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 10, 2014 3:53 pm
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Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2014 2:19 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2015 1:22 pm
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