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Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2013 12:52 pm
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Pumpkinheart Family Info
Miyu comes from a long line of Pumpkin growers the Pumpkinhearts they are one of the major suppliers of pumpkins for Halloween originally they were two separate families that were in competition with each other but eventually merged into one large family
The kinds of pumpkins they grow range from your average Pumpkins to multicolored ones to ones with strange shapes to ones that are for eating and come in a verity of flavors to ones that are alive to even the special pumpkins used in breeding new Halloween creatured they also sell enchanted pumpkins and seeds for growing your own
Because of their profitable business they are well off in the money department but live rather humbly considering the amount of wealth they have and every member is raised to know that this wealth is not guarantied nor to be expected and comes from hard work and determination also that being wealthy does NOT make you better then others this mindset is passed down to each generation
The Pumpkinheart family tree is large and quite extended every branch that has children usually have two or three kids so there is always someone to take over there is five main branches and many many smaller branches of the family the farm is HUGE and their are five large houses on the farm with one in each corner and the largest in the very center this is where the head branch of the family lives each main branch has their own part of the farm and maintains it mostly themselves having free reign over what type of Pumpkins they want to grow there
Every member of the House specializes in growing at least one particular type of pumpkin which is usually effected by what their natural ability is
Miyu's Branch of the Family is the main Branch of the family and it consists of her Mother and Father plus their parents and her Brother however due to the size she they share the house with several of their cousins, aunts, uncles, etc
Her Family
James Pumpkinheart - Is Miyu's father he's gentle, friendly, and kind his family ALL of them means alot to him he has a good sense of humor and doesn't let much bother him so he's overall pretty laid back but does love a good adventure however while he is soft gentle in his speech and mannerisums he is brave and is fierce if need be especially when protecting his family he is a Pumpkinheart by birth and is the first born child so he inherited the main house and land he's very devoted to the farm and keeps things running smoothly
What he primarily grows is Pumpkins that come alive either as minipets or other creatures mostly because his natural ability is Familiar Summoning and his "weapon" is a large Pumpkin beast so he has a natural talent for being around creatures
Elizabeth(Liz) Pumpkinheart - Elizabeth known primarily as Liz is Miyu's Mother she is more bold, brave, rash, and adventurous then her husbin always loving a good battle and a good adventure however she is very friendly and generally modest over all she married into the family after meeting and falling in love with James in school both originally were supposed to be FEAR collectors and James younger brother was due to cover the farm raising however James despite having stronger FEAR then his brother prefered growing things and vice versa on his brothers part so after James told Liz what he did she found she loved it too and they decided to take over the farm instead
What she grows primarily is pumpkins that are enchanted and she actually helps others grow their pumpkins more then growing her own by using the various tools and such she's enchanted if one couldn't tell her Natural Ability is Enchanting
William (Wills) Pumpkinheart - Is Miyu's brother he is calm and cool most of the time he preferes to keep a level head, think things through, and think rationally rather then acting on impluse and just rushing into things he loves his younger sister dearly and they are the best of friends he's also a bit protective of her so if he's around a beef with her is a beef with him wether she wants it to be or not
The pumpkins he primarily grows are well just about everything however he primarily focuses on altered pumpkins like ones that are different colors or taste differently from a natural pumpkin he also helps his father with his Pumpkin creatures his natural ability is Potion Making so not only does he have a green arm and a natural way with animals so he can get the ingredients he needs but he has a natural talent for mixing potions and so has created and tweeked many formulas and potions for Pumpkin growing
(Will cover the Grandparents later)
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Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2013 1:19 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2013 1:25 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 30, 2013 12:56 pm
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Her Familiar Name: Tounasu Toma (Toma) Nicknames: Pum, Kitter, Tou, Jacks, Pumcat Gender: Male Fear: Fire Element Appearence: A young pumpkin orange house cat with shadow black eyes (the white part of his eyes are white) He also has these markings [x] (but with regular cat ears) Personality: Sweet, Kind, Playful, Jolly, Brave, but also knows when to be Serious, knowingly wise
Friendship - Like Miyu Toma cherishes friendship Miyu is one of his best friends and he is friends with alot of her friends as well as having his own he's also close friends with all her minipets
Adventurous - Toma is adventurous just like Miyu is and loves exploring places often going off on his own to explore and get into things though he preferes exploring with Miyu he's more then willing to have a adventure with a friend also
Talkitive - Like many Familiars Toma can speak the general language of halloween he's also strangely well versed in other languages something he was born with
Minipet talker? - Yes Toma can speak Minipet and often translates for her as well as relaying messages from the Minipets
Playful - Toma is still very much a kitten at heart and will be the first to tell you so he loves playing and running around the room playing with the minipets he also likes leaving her room to find others to play with and also has a tendency as most cats do to find the one person who wants nothing to do with him and wants to play with them
Cuddly - As much as Toma loves to run and play he loves a good warm lap or shoulder or chest to lay on and just cuddle if your a friend of his or Miyu's then expect at some point to find a Pumpkin Orange Cat in your lap wanting pets and skritches
Wise - Despite being born when he was first summoned Toma has alot of ancient knowledge stored in him which he pulls out when he needs it even if he didn't know he knew it and he's actually the one that has taught Miyu most of her spells including the Summoning Spell
Summoned Beast: Toma knows what specie he is he is a creature known as a Summoned Beast Familiar which is a creature that has a regular form and a Summoned Beast Form which often helps aid in combat when needed or desired as the Summoner gets stronger the Summoned beast Familiar gets stronger when the Summoner has reach a certain level of strength they will gain access to the next level of the Summoning spell which Summons a bigger and stronger form of the Familiar then before there usually is only three maybe 4 levels to this
Current Summoned Beast Form: Toma is still Pumpkin Orange with Shadow Black Eyes in his Summoned Beast form but he is the size of a Cheetah and has almost the bulk of a Leopard he's pretty light on his feet and fast while having good strength as well as magic he's too small yet to ride but can carry Miyu out of danger a short distence
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Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2014 4:08 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2014 9:58 pm
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Posted: Thu May 01, 2014 12:38 pm
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Hi Rikku!
I have a couple crits/suggestions for you:
Something to keep in mind:
Y1s are the bottom of the totem pole when it comes to powers and abilities, and needless to say, you have a lot of powers and abilities listed here, which is reading as incredibly over powered. Keep in mind that as a Y1 - even a Y1 Bonbene Witch - there will be a lot of restrictions. Start modest and small, and slowly work up to something more powerful throughout her time at Amity.
Try to keep her powers and abilities down to:
ONE Natural Ability: Either Familiar Summoning, OR Born Accessory - not both. If you choose the Born Accessory, keep in mind that it can't be totally indestructible, and will have to be limited in power as well. Again, Y1s are weak and have little going for them. If you choose the familiar summoning, Miyu can simply be possessive of their hat. Even with the Familiar Summoning, Toma would be as weak and restricted as Miyu is, because he's technically a Y1 too, since he's an extension of her. Plus, as a side note, I don't believe that even familiars can converse with minipets. Maybe understand body language to get a general idea, but not flat-out speak to.
ONE FEAR: This would be only ONE of the spells you had listed OR the summoned beast form of Toma - not both.
The more I read her the more I suggest you nix the Pumpkin Wand entirely, and make Toma her Reaper 'Weapon', which would free up the Natural Ability to be her 'Born Accessory', which would really just be a very important (to her) hat that perhaps creates a mild (IC) boost to her FEAR, and her FEAR can continue to be the Pyra attack you have listed, just minus the wand.
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Posted: Mon May 05, 2014 1:39 pm
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Hey there! She's such a cutie! heart Just thought I'd put in my 2c as well on the lore of the world of halloween. smile
Quote: Natural Ability: Familiar Summoning Miyu can summon her familiar Toma who is a Pumpkin Orange Colored cat with shadow black eyes using a special spell she can summon him in a special form a Summoned Beast form which is bigger and stronger and good for battle This is a little too OP for a y1 natural ability! Please save the 'special stronger' variant as a y2 upgrade to her natural ability. smile
Quote: they are one of the major suppliers of pumpkins for Halloween Pumpkins often come into natural existence via hopeful parents or something else-- a major supplier is fine, but your backstory (her family and the rival family) can't have a monopoly on the growth of pumpkins! After all, pumpkins are the backbone of Halloween society biggrin ! This is simply too powerful. Something like this would be a custom artifact. There are such a thing as racial abilities, but those tend to be involved with the body of the student. Wings, for instance, generally means that someone can fly. My old student, Aleria, and Tig's Aymet, have connections to frost in their species. As such, they were both often very cold to the touch--freezing, in fact!
However, if i wanted to make that cold affect the environment *around* aleria, that would have made it a natural ability. Since the born accessory extends beyond the reign of the witch's body, and has an assortment of other nifty powers, it'd be best off as an artifact rather than something classified as a species ability.
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