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 Posted: Wed Mar 08, 2006 1:56 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 09, 2006 10:07 pm
The one you wrote about your dad, that is a touchy subject and you slid right through it... maybe you should expand it to get the impact that you are wanting with that one, or use stronger more feeling words. Just a thought.
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Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2006 3:55 pm
I think they're pretty good.
I write poetry, but it tends to be kind of wierd....
but yea, I liked your first one
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Posted: Mon Mar 13, 2006 2:33 pm
I really liked it. I write poetry as well. twisted
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Posted: Sun Mar 19, 2006 1:24 am
Im going to go out on a limb here and say most of us... do..
Very nice, I like how you where able to shift from one style to the next.
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