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 Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2006 9:05 am
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Posted: Sat Mar 11, 2006 11:50 am
eek Wow.
I had to write a sonnet for my English class as well but... mine was not so beautiful. I don't know if you would describe it as that but I think it is beautiful.
Wait let me read it again.
And again. Just to be sure I love it as much as I think I do.
Yup, I do. 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2006 4:02 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 9:20 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 03, 2006 6:36 am
wheeeee thank you everyone ^^; i am grateful for you kind comments ^__^
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Posted: Tue Apr 04, 2006 5:12 am
I really like the emotive qualities you have tried to communicate in your poem. It's very easy to relate to feeling in this poem. And don't hate me for pointing this out, but your iambic pentameter is a little dodgy as far as stressed and unstressed syllables goes. You usually have 10 syllables in each line, but the stresses don't line up with the proper form for a sonnet.
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Posted: Wed Apr 05, 2006 10:42 am
haha 'tsokay. yeah, my english teacher said the same thing about the stresses -.-; rhythm IS rather iffy and unstable at times ^^; i should probably fix it up some time soon.
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