pain (warning kinda depressing)

[epical awesome]

I wallow in my pain so strong,

I wonder what I did so wrong,

I think about it oh so long,

like a stupid dumb painful song

It goes around in my mind,

like a gross disgusting hateful ryhme.

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A poem I wrote when I was really depressed.

Did you like it?  

[Metamorfosis Mental]

another good one.
keep writing boy.  

[Beauty_Neko]

I think its good to write such a ryhme
if you have a hard time.

but keep my words in your mind
dont get lost in darkness and sorrow
there will always be a tomorrow
and then for you, the sun will shine biggrin
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I hope, now your ok biggrin  

[epical awesome]

Beauty_Neko

I think its good to write such a ryhme
if you have a hard time.

but keep my words in your mind
dont get lost in darkness and sorrow
there will always be a tomorrow
and then for you, the sun will shine biggrin
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I hope, now your ok biggrin

Thanks and yeah I'm okay now.
Nice poem by the way I like it