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Metamorfosis Mental

Lonely Lunatic

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2012 9:21 pm
Fue tan constante tu ausencia, que ya olvidé lo que se sentía amarte.
En cada noche, sentía cómo se clavaba la daga de tu desencanto.
Fue allí dónde mi vida se volvía vacia, escasos recuerdos y murmullos muy tenues se cobijaban en mi ser, en mi triste ser.

Las perlas de la noche iban colgando los viejos recuerdos.
adornando la tragedia con pequeñas sonrisas.
El cuerpo se sentía muy delgado y deprimido.
Por qué?
En ésta habitación, tú, mujer, eras la vida en el abismo.
Cómo no te diste cuenta de toda esa magia?

Pensando en ti, en el tiempo que te conocí, en esa bella sonrisa de luna menguante.
Pero, fue tan constante tu ausencia, que ya olvidé lo que se sentía amarte.
-V. Hugo G. A. -

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Your absence was so steady that I already forgot what it felt like love.
Each night, I felt how the dagger of your disenchantment was nailing
It was there where my life became empty, poor memories and very faint murmurs are sheltered in myself, in my sad being.

The pearls of night was hanging the old memories.
adorning the tragedy with small smiles.
The body was very thin and depressed.
Why?
In this room, you, woman, you were living in the abyss.
How didn't you realize all the magic?

Thinking of you, in the time I met you, in that beautiful smile of waning moon.
But your absence was so steady that I already forgot what it felt like love.
-V. Hugo G. A. -
 
PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 3:32 pm
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Metamorfosis Mental

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 5:35 pm
Excellent. Very good translation, and I really like how deep the words strike me.  
PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 6:48 pm
Elder Astrauld
Excellent. Very good translation, and I really like how deep the words strike me.
Thanks for appreciate my poetry.  

Metamorfosis Mental

Lonely Lunatic

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His Majesty Satan
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 8:40 pm
Metamorfosis Mental
Elder Astrauld
Excellent. Very good translation, and I really like how deep the words strike me.
Thanks for appreciate my poetry.


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