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 Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2012 5:21 pm
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Ok, so right now, my English class is just starting to read Romeo and Juliet. Many of us, if not all, already know the story of the two star-crossed lovers, doomed by fate. But while I was trying to do the vocab for it, I found myself formulating a poem. Abandoning my homework, I started writing it down. Now, it didn't end up being exactly like Romeo and Juliet but whatever. Just tell me what you think. I would really appreciate some feedback!
Your kisses silence my beating heart.
It shall surely ache once we part.
Forget me not, my beloved flower,
And I will meet you in an hour.
In secret, to the garden we flee.
There to be alone, there to be free.
Here in the place where we always meet,
Here you say things so soft and sweet.
"Run away with me to another land
Where I can safely hold your hand.
Away from all that keeps us apart
To a place that I may pour out my heart."
I agree and we part, reluctantly so
Only until midnight though
I wake and see that you are not there
I start to wonder if you care.
But poison, I find, has taken your life.
And I was to be your lovely wife.
The pain I feel is far too much.
My knuckles turn white 'round the knife I clutch.
Your kisses silence my beating heart.
Together forever, till death do us part.
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2012 5:29 pm
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His Majesty Satan Captain
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2012 6:27 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 2:21 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 2:37 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 2:39 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 3:18 pm
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Metamorfosis Mental Girl on Fire 12 Metamorfosis Mental I like it a lot. Congrats. it's... it's very very good. Thanks for reading. I'm glad you like it. smile I don't like it <.< I hate it cool just kidding wink how I wouldn't like it? It's very good. Keep writing girl.
Haha you scared me there for a second but thanks. I plan to keep writing. In fact, I am working on a novel right now. You can find it in the fantasy forum if you want to check it out. Thanks again! |
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 3:21 pm
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Girl on Fire 12 Metamorfosis Mental Girl on Fire 12 Metamorfosis Mental I like it a lot. Congrats. it's... it's very very good. Thanks for reading. I'm glad you like it. smile I don't like it <.< I hate it cool just kidding wink how I wouldn't like it? It's very good. Keep writing girl. Haha you scared me there for a second but thanks. I plan to keep writing. In fact, I am working on a novel right now. You can find it in the fantasy forum if you want to check it out. Thanks again! |
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 10:33 pm
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Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 8:29 am
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Posted: Fri May 04, 2012 12:29 pm
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 10:58 am
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