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The Lives of Wise Men

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His Majesty Satan
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 23, 2012 5:04 pm
The world was but mine to grab,
Though common sense slipped away.
Leaving I, a thoughtless thinker,
My mind so easily frayed.

Human I am, a common man,
Tall like a sprouting flower.
Though in the eyes of greater men,
Life had no purpose with the absence of power.

But I kept my pride, I kept my life,
At the price of immortality,
Though I may not be remembered,
At least I’ve kept morality.  
PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2012 10:05 am
Reverse: The Greater Men
Easily I get what I desire
What I own is deserved
Leaving me with leisure in mind
Confusion and bother is also there

Human I was, yet my soul fades
For riches I payed a price
Thoughts of a common man I beseech
To take back what I have lost

I was loathed, but I have lived
A life of despair and torment
Though I have marked my name
Underneath is the scarcity of soul, and fringes of pain  

Nostis


His Majesty Satan
Captain

PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2012 5:46 pm
Nostis
Reverse: The Greater Men
Easily I get what I desire
What I own is deserved
Leaving me with leisure in mind
Confusion and bother is also there

Human I was, yet my soul fades
For riches I payed a price
Thoughts of a common man I beseech
To take back what I have lost

I was loathed, but I have lived
A life of despair and torment
Though I have marked my name
Underneath is the scarcity of soul, and fringes of pain


That's really good! I actually wrote the other part at school lol!

This world full of new horizons,
Places and things to see.
But now that I have a chance
I won't seize opportunity.

Human I am, a greater man,
Tall like a sprouting flower,
But lesser men tend to envy
My ever so endless power.

I've lost my pride, lost my life,
But immortal I shall stay,
But at the price of dignity,
I'll be mentioned every day.  
PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2012 6:18 pm
I posted the original poem in the Arenas if you guys want to boost my ratings! Here It Is!  

His Majesty Satan
Captain


Nostis

PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2012 12:13 am
Quote:
That's really good! I actually wrote the other part at school lol!

This world full of new horizons,
Places and things to see.
But now that I have a chance
I won't seize opportunity.

Human I am, a greater man,
Tall like a sprouting flower,
But lesser men tend to envy
My ever so endless power.

I've lost my pride, lost my life,
But immortal I shall stay,
But at the price of dignity,
I'll be mentioned every day.


woah! yours is better !  
PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2012 4:08 pm
Nostis
Quote:
That's really good! I actually wrote the other part at school lol!

This world full of new horizons,
Places and things to see.
But now that I have a chance
I won't seize opportunity.

Human I am, a greater man,
Tall like a sprouting flower,
But lesser men tend to envy
My ever so endless power.

I've lost my pride, lost my life,
But immortal I shall stay,
But at the price of dignity,
I'll be mentioned every day.


woah! yours is better !


Ah, I wouldn't say that!  

His Majesty Satan
Captain

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