Logic

[His Majesty Satan]

In this world of argumentation,
None of us are free,
For freedom comes at but a price,
A price too high for me.

To give up my personality,
Would be a personal crime.
To sell my soul to a "Holy World"
Would kill me over time.

We've been told that we had rights,
To speak, to pray, to express.
When I do these things, I am knocked down,
Slumping and depressed.

So I shall proclaim to this world,
"Let us be ourselves,
"For if our race begins to change,
"Our world should change as well."  

[Night Kunoichi]

I loved it! Wonderful message! Damn I wished I could have written something like this when I was 14! Well executed rhythm and tone and everything flowed nicely. Good job!  

[His Majesty Satan]

Night Kunoichi

I loved it! Wonderful message! Damn I wished I could have written something like this when I was 14! Well executed rhythm and tone and everything flowed nicely. Good job!

Thank you very much. I have a lot of opinions on our society at this point. Gay rights and controlling the body of a woman are both freedoms and choices that should be up to the person, not to the nation, and those are things I believe this poem could be applied to. Thanks for the feedback.  

[Night Kunoichi]

Elder Astrauld

Night Kunoichi

I loved it! Wonderful message! Damn I wished I could have written something like this when I was 14! Well executed rhythm and tone and everything flowed nicely. Good job!

Thank you very much. I have a lot of opinions on our society at this point. Gay rights and controlling the body of a woman are both freedoms and choices that should be up to the person, not to the nation, and those are things I believe this poem could be applied to. Thanks for the feedback.

I completely and wholeheartedly agree! And no problem!  

[GhostlyMark]

i can relate to that poem, well anybody with an open mind can relate to it, nice work captain  

[His Majesty Satan]

GhostlyMark

i can relate to that poem, well anybody with an open mind can relate to it, nice work captain

Thank you.  

[Metamorfosis Mental]

I like the way of your constant impulse, It' feels like a thousand voices claiming for his personality. Resembling the days when a lion is captured and he want to be free once again.  

[His Majesty Satan]

Thank you for all your support. Makes me feel very good smile