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a song i wrote, is it any good?

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the song lyrics are...
  really good
  good
  not bad, but could use some work
  ive seen better
  complete crap
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_Built_to_Offend_666

PostPosted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 5:32 pm

Sewn-On Eyeball

I cried today
I smiled today
I laughed today
I killed today
Maggots and bigots surrounding their spit-hole spigots
Fossilized from rock hard agates
Infesting and nesting, manufacturing us as a pariah
Infecting our lives with their messiah
Feeding on fear, they attack from the rear
A uniform of clogged-up ears
Conquer the heathens, give the gift of tears
Tempered and seething, I'm eating the newborn flies
I'm now lying in a bucket of bloody organs and lies

I feel like I'm trapped inside some other life
All I do only feeds into my social strife
I don't even know if I can feel emotion anymore
Cast me off for my beliefs as you've done so many times before
Then drown me in all of your blood-stained wholesome decor

Mutating our lives to fit your crown of thorns
Mutating our lives to fit your crown of thorns
Mutating our lives to fit your crown of thorns
Mutating and reborn
Mutating our lives to fit your crown of thorns
Mutating our lives to fit your crown of thorns
Mutating our lives to fit your crown of thorns
Mutating and reborn
Mutating our lives to fit your crown of thorns
Mutating our lives to fit your crown of thorns
Mutating our lives to fit your crown of thorns
Mutating, I'm not mourned

I see something
You see something
We see nothing
You say everything
I say everything
Conveyed: nothing
Peeked in the crowd
Bet you're feeling rather proud
To be right over so many others
A one surrounded by so many zeros
Then why is there no one that says you're a hero?
I'm wrong because you say so
Outnumbered because of conformity
I can't dent you because I am so low
I step out of line and you label it calamity
I guess I have nothing to live for anymore

I feel like I'm trapped inside some other life
All I do only feeds into my social strife
I don't even know if I can feel emotion anymore
Cast me off for my beliefs as you've done so many times before
Then drown me in all of your blood-stained wholesome decor

I'd rather be dead than be force-fed by you!
I'd rather be dead than be force-fed by you!
I'd rather be dead than be force-fed by you!
I'd rather be dead than be force-fed by you!
I swear I'll bite off your head!

So many so blind
Where is your mind?
So many blind minds
So many blind minds

{I feel like I'm trapped inside some other life
All I do only feeds into my social strife
I don't even know if I can feel emotion anymore
Cast me off for my beliefs as you've done so many times before
Then drown me in all of your blood-stained wholesome decor} - [2x]

Just taste your waste before you staple my face
Just taste your waste before you staple my face
Just taste your waste before you staple my face
Just taste your waste before you staple my face
 
PostPosted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 2:06 pm
Is this going to be put to a metal beat too?  

Polaree


_Built_to_Offend_666

PostPosted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 2:54 pm
history_nazi
Is this going to be put to a metal beat too?


ya, its going to be a metal song.  
PostPosted: Fri Feb 24, 2006 1:55 pm
Awesome. Okay, this song is much better than the last b/c it's more structered. Not that the other was like horrible or anything...

Neway, this is good.  

Polaree


Goddess_of_Sacred_Blood

PostPosted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 12:08 pm
If I could write to a rythm like that, I ... would have more of a life... sad  
PostPosted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 12:41 pm
great that is really good better then what I have!  

panic overdose

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