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Bad BIood

PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2011 8:54 pm
I'm what you call a b***h,
a f*****t, a snitch,
a maggot.
A factor of the deceased,
and an infection in your disease.
They say age is just a state of mind,
so does it still matter if I live or die?
I'm drowning in your fire,
and I'm burning in thou water.
I'm damned,
and in demand of a life to steal.
I refuse to sell my soul,
so let's just ******** sell the world.
You've kept me in a congested cage,
full of hate and hurtful ways.
If salvation is a sin,
Then b***h, send me to hell.
In my world, murder fails
and Mary hails.
Backwards and injected with
contradiction- at it's best.
Salvation.
Predation.
Attrition.
Sedation.
Congested.
Injection.
If salvation is a sin-
then b***h,
we'll all have hell
.

 
PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2011 9:01 pm
Bad BIood
I'm what you call a b***h,
a f*****t, a snitch,
a maggot.
A factor of the deceased,
and an infection in your disease.
They say age is just a state of mind,
so does it still matter if I live or die?
I'm drowning in your fire,
and I'm burning in thou water.
I'm damned,
and in demand of a life to steal.
I refuse to sell my soul,
so let's just ******** sell the world.
You've kept me in a congested cage,
full of hate and hurtful ways.
If salvation is a sin,
Then b***h, send me to hell.
In my world, murder fails
and Mary hails.
Backwards and injected with
contradiction- at it's best.
Salvation.
Predation.
Attrition.
Sedation.
Congested.
Injection.
If salvation is a sin-
then b***h,
we'll all have hell
.



I can relate to quite a bit of this, to be honest.  

His Majesty Satan
Captain


Bad BIood

PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2011 9:06 pm
I wrote it about selling your soul to the devil, and realizing the evils of earth. Bullying, and in some cases, Religion being some of them.
Then commiting suicide, or earning "salvation". Suicides a sin. so, "If Salvation is a sin, then send me to hell".  
PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2011 9:11 pm
Good meaning. I have a lot of questions about religious aspects, some of which I vocalize quite loudly, but I probably shouldn't xD  

His Majesty Satan
Captain


Gnomes-san
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sat Dec 17, 2011 8:09 am
Anything you can't question, I would advise not being a part of...


The poem, btw, has something that I don't notice a lot in modern poetry, which is why I steer clear of it, mostly: authenticity. I mean, of course for centuries poets have at least been partially writing what people want to hear. They have to make a living like anyone else. But I think it's almost reached an epidemic point now, and people assume poetry should sound like or be something specific. This is not like that, and it's refreshing.  
PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 4:06 pm
Its nice to see someone with an original mind. And I personally relate to the whole poem. But, from what I read of yours, you seem to have a rather dark mind..... Nice  

DrksStoryteller9000

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