Kolita Needs a Fresh Eyeee (aka am I being too critical?!11)

[Captain Kolita]

Alright. So. I drew this: This Here I was very pleased, I was trying to draw a light hearted animu thing and felt I succeeded. THEN. I FLIPPED IT AROUND. And everything looked so SO terrible! It looked like the balance of her face was TOTALLY jacked. So my question...

Is it okay? Or does it look like her face is squished and slanting weird?

BE HONEST. I MEAN IT. ;o;  

[A t r o c i t y]

Very cute!!!
The tip of the hat is a bit weird, lol... use a cap picture for reference
Add in eyebrows
Everything else looks great otherwise! 3nodding  

[Errol McGillivray]

Try drawing something else similar, and post your steps. We can tell you what went wrong.  

[lunarian light]

Doesn't that happen with everyone?

Many artists who draw digitally make a habit of flipping their work around, seeing it from all perspectives during the line work process. That helps I guess.  

[Captain Kolita]

Yeah, thanks guys. sweatdrop I've gotten in the habit of flipping it before doing any inking or coloring so it's not happening to me much anymore. :3 Thanks for the tips~  

[C e r u l e a n]

I think why her face looks 'squished' is because of her eyes. She looks crossed eye, the way you drew and painted them. sweatdrop And as someone else mentioned, the tip of the cap doesn't look right. I hope that helped.