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Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2011 2:38 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2011 5:05 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2011 5:30 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2011 6:39 pm
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Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2011 10:05 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 4:40 am
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Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 11:28 am
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Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 12:01 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 1:46 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 2:45 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 2:54 pm
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I would change one of the messed up parts of it. When they say that a drawing won't work to get someones identity, using Shinigami Eyes, then you shoudn't be able to see a name and face if only a picture appears on TV or a Picture, because a TV's screen is just a bunch of vertical lines that never, ever touch, at all. So thats what I would change... Also I would Give Matt a more major role, making him preform more Espionage work for Mello. I would make Near just a bit older... I would make L NOT die, just make him quit the case in fear for his, and get Watari to delete all data, making Wammy's House to believe he was dead. I would change how Mello died, but I would still keep it in there. I would have him die by protecting someone or something precious to him. As for Matt, I'd kill him off in a similar way to his original death. But instead of just getting shot up, he'd get surrounded. They'd tell him to get out of the car. He'd open the door and get out. But right before he gets shot, he'd grab his gun and shot some guys. (Inspired by CSI: LV) As for Near, I'd have him eventually team up with the non-dead L and take down Kira. I'd also have Misa appear in the last chapter, make her the one that is seen praying. One more thing, I'd make it how Light dies in the directors cut edition. Matsuda shoots Light, but Mikami stabs himself, making a big enough distraction for Light to escape. He'd make it to a different ware house, and die on the stairs from blood loss. Then, a shinigami wearing Light's clothing would approach Ryuk and talk to him as if they were old friends. (I'd add a rule to the Death Note as well.. When someone with a strong will who uses it dies, they become a shinigami)
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Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 6:24 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 7:23 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 8:21 pm
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jhblakes34 I would change one of the messed up parts of it. When they say that a drawing won't work to get someones identity, using Shinigami Eyes, then you shoudn't be able to see a name and face if only a picture appears on TV or a Picture, because a TV's screen is just a bunch of vertical lines that never, ever touch, at all. So thats what I would change... Also I would Give Matt a more major role, making him preform more Espionage work for Mello. I would make Near just a bit older... I would make L NOT die, just make him quit the case in fear for his, and get Watari to delete all data, making Wammy's House to believe he was dead. I would change how Mello died, but I would still keep it in there. I would have him die by protecting someone or something precious to him. As for Matt, I'd kill him off in a similar way to his original death. But instead of just getting shot up, he'd get surrounded. They'd tell him to get out of the car. He'd open the door and get out. But right before he gets shot, he'd grab his gun and shot some guys. (Inspired by CSI: LV) As for Near, I'd have him eventually team up with the non-dead L and take down Kira. I'd also have Misa appear in the last chapter, make her the one that is seen praying. One more thing, I'd make it how Light dies in the directors cut edition. Matsuda shoots Light, but Mikami stabs himself, making a big enough distraction for Light to escape. He'd make it to a different ware house, and die on the stairs from blood loss. Then, a shinigami wearing Light's clothing would approach Ryuk and talk to him as if they were old friends. (I'd add a rule to the Death Note as well.. When someone with a strong will who uses it dies, they become a shinigami)
Dude I never thought of it like that. But ya thats what I'd change to. I have never said this before but: You are SO good at thinking of ideas! 4laugh 4laugh
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Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:58 am
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