Rate/critique my art?

[Immoral Oblivion]

I'll just give a few so you can see my style and get the jist of it. And, sorry if some of them are bad quality(well not bad, just not scanned quality). I usually do it on a canvas.. and you can't scan that. blaugh

My room: I painted it. Thoughts? UNO
This is my photo realism. Thoughts? DOS
This is how I combine the first & second style.. It's abstract yet it's realistic in a way that it's detailed. Thoughts? TRES?  

[xena91388]

Is the window sill really a good place to put a laptop? >_>

You work is great!! There's not much I can say against it, as that style is hard to judge, but it all looks great!

The only thing I have a problem with are the blue faces on the wall with the laptop. Are they unfinished? Because as they are, they don't really fit with the other stuff on there IMO and look a little out of place. It would be better if you had continued the blue stripe/swirl pattern or put in more face balloons in that spot.  

[Immoral Oblivion]

xena91388

Is the window sill really a good place to put a laptop? >_>

You work is great!! There's not much I can say against it, as that style is hard to judge, but it all looks great!

The only thing I have a problem with are the blue faces on the wall with the laptop. Are they unfinished? Because as they are, they don't really fit with the other stuff on there IMO and look a little out of place. It would be better if you had continued the blue stripe/swirl pattern or put in more face balloons in that spot.

How do they not fit in? The whole walls are faces! blaugh

But, yeah, it wasn't completely finished, that was like the 98% mark lol.  

[xena91388]

lol! Looks great for 98% XD

I know it's all faces everywhere but the big blue ones just don't fit confused Think of of it like looking at a picture of the Mona Lisa and then right above Mona's head there is big cartoony Nom-Nom sun!

I say cover them with the stripes and then put more random face-balloons in there! blaugh  

[ll Angelic Agony ll]

For uno and tres, why are there so many faces?  

[Immoral Oblivion]

ll Angelic Agony ll

For uno and tres, why are there so many faces?

Because I ave a face fetish. blaugh