sketchbook ni FlipMaester [more WIPs]

[FlipMaester]

So Heya Guild I haven't been here in a long long time = A=
so yeah I don't know if any of you remember me though but yeah XD
I'll start posting my stuff here more often from now on specially the ones I'm having trouble on and whatnot, anyways,
here's the stuff to look at

Finished
critiques on these would be nice smile I'd like to know what I can do to improve and whatnot. I try to be very open in art and try a lot of different things so my art isn't really consistent
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Work In Progress
help on these would be much appreciated so feel free to do some
redlines and whatnot
WIP(took out the wings for this one to focus more on the other features)
WIP2

NOTE TO STAFF:
I'm not sure if my old sketchbook is still up I tried looking for it but couldn't so if you see the old one could you delete it for me? please and thank you biggrin  

[Quvi]

Regarding your WIP:

Hm, the right arm doesn't line up if you look closely (the line at the top of the breast compared to the bottom of the breast), and the fingers are off. It looks like an incomplete sketch, so moving on.

The wings look like they are of two different species. Each wing is built differently if you look at the angle of the wings' shapes. Looking at the figure as a three dimensional figure, the right wing's marginal coverts (the bridge connecting the person and the wing are completely different lengths. The figure is standing in a frontal plane, but the wings are in a different perspective.According to how it is right now, the right wing is sprouting higher than the left one.

It is looking nice at the moment, though. I am liking the smooth, clean lines. Keep pushing it! smile

I won't comment on your one tone shading because that's just your stylistic choice.  

[FlipMaester]

Quvi

thanks so much for your input biggrin
yeah I noticed that there was something off with the wings but just couldnt figure it out (rarely draws wings) so I'll try fixing that up. and thank you for pointing out the arm :O I should go fix that up  

[CrystalFlameStar]

the second image are perfect, very well designed! wink  

[FlipMaester]

OH GOD GUILD D8 I keep procrastinating from art!!!  

[FlipMaester]

ayahhhh = A= I need to stop working on so many things and just focus on finishing the ones I have right now