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I'm Still Alive

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evolvingwolf

PostPosted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 4:24 pm
I'm Still Alive
Keep me bleeding,
Heavily breathing,
At least I know I'm still alive
I can take the pain,
Take on all the blame,
At least I know I'm still alive
I'd prefer the hurt,
Because feeling nothing is worse,
At least, with that, I know I'm still alive
So bring on the blood,
The uncertainty of love,
So I know that I'm still alive.  
PostPosted: Sat Oct 16, 2010 5:08 pm
you should try your hand at songwriting, that's where I feel you'd shine. The musicality of your writing would transition beautifully.  

Stelle Cadenti
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evolvingwolf

PostPosted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 10:21 am
Awwww, thank you! My sister is the song writer though... I'm not so musically inclined. 3nodding  
PostPosted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 5:24 pm
I think you should be the lyricist and she should be the music composer for it. biggrin

This is a very beautiful poem.  

Joonbong


evolvingwolf

PostPosted: Mon Oct 18, 2010 8:42 am
Thank you for the kind words! heart  
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