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stealthmongoose

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 9:01 pm
Break! Mind! Soul! Body!

Break thy tyrannical voice from me!

Must i eat!? Must i eat!? Must i sleep!? Must breathing so vex me!?

I am free to eat? Free to breathe!? Free to dream? How free is this freedom i am given if i never asked for it!?

Yet without it, what is freedom!? This soft feeling of elated choice, choice unhindered by thought, or emotion, simply existence!

Then to be free is to silence one's thoughts. Thoughts that wish to be free to speak. Speak of bad as well is good. That is true freedom, is it not!?

NO! 'Tis tyranny, the mind says. 'Tis tyranny to let an unsilenced voice speak of another's freedoms! But then it is me trapping myself.

God, i am free! Does this freedome come from me? Are others free!? if others are free, and hate me for being so...

...is it in their freedom to trap me!? Silence the voice! No! It is a free voice! Doubt is free, then so is pride!

Is freedom pride? Confidence? Another voice...how does one break bondage?

The answer is...to break bondage, one must break freedom.  
PostPosted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 1:48 pm
That poem sound like me.  

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 24, 2010 5:45 pm
That was very well done, you could almost feel when thoughts were rushed or would slow down. I Enjoyed reading it.  
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