Broken Rose

[pandorahopeless]

"Broken Rose"

broken rose,
my words rained over you

I was like a child, enraptured
in the dying day
beside the climbing vines
ever seeking

vanquished sun,
your eyes spacious as the sky
your mouth kissed my earth

in the streets where no one saw you
I named you my queen,
no one saw your crown of red gold
but the hymn of your being
shook the bells in my body

to the edges of the world
our song unites us:
solitude like the stars
is so distant and longing--
I cannot live without life

broken rose,
in your bloom I found my breath
folds of retained fire,
little volcano of my love  

[Azal_Son of Anubis]

Replace broken...if you want...this is really really really great poem.

THIS is good. why arent there more comments?(andplease post poetry in the section specified for it...Capt. said so)  

[I Like to Eat Faces]

This is really good. Have you ever read any works by E. E. Cummings? This sounds a lot like his style.