new poem....

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this is a poem that i wrote.... i would really like ur opinions. thanks ^^ *hug*

the final fall.....

There once was a boy who
Without his girl didn’t know what to do
He would sit in a corner and cry
Without her he should die

As his happiness faded hers increased
He pretended but the pain never ceased
He missed her more with each passing day
He knew then that he would never be the same

There were others of course
But she was his lifes course
Then one day she was hurt by another boy
One who said all she did was annoy

She hurt and felt hated by all
So she took that final fall
She never saw the love from him
She died with him hanging on a wimb

He couldn’t live without her its too hard
He fell too so they wouldn’t be apart
Reunited at last
She sees her mistake from the past.

 

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hm..... have u heard the song Love Her by Seether? if not, look up the lyrics. its partically that, mixed with my life. hope that makes any sense smile