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Quiet Misty Morning

PostPosted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 10:44 pm
Take My Hand

(Verse One)
My eyes were rimmed with red
When you kissed my head
The tears started spilling out
I closed my eyes and said
I had this dream
That you were gonna leave
And never come back
Oh, no, never come back

(Chorus)
I don’t know why and I don’t know how
But I’m still figuring it out
So I threw my arms around you
The truth is there, but oh it changes
No one else could understand
Who we are, and where we stand
And I know you’re there, and I know you care
So please, please take my hand

(Verse Two)
You were always by me
I knew but I couldn’t see
The arms in which you caught me in
Were there, but they weren’t seen
I don’t need them anymore
I built four walls without a door
Come stand next to me
Next to me instead

(CHORUS)

(BRIDGE)
And oh, oh how my eyes are opened
Wider each and every day
I’m finding myself, no,
I’m creating myself
I always find a way.

I said oh, oh how my eyes are opened
Every day, and every night
You can’t find yourself
Only create yourself
If there’s a will, there’s always a way

(END CHORUS)
So no I don’t know why
And no I don’t know how
But don’t worry
I’m figuring it out
If you’ll stand next to me
Nothing but equality
I hope you will, I know you will
Come… And take my hand.  
PostPosted: Fri Aug 20, 2010 5:35 pm
Quiet Misty Morning
Take My Hand

(Verse One)
My eyes were rimmed with red
When you kissed my head
The tears started spilling out
I closed my eyes and said
I had this dream
That you were gonna leave
And never come back
Oh, no, never come back

(Chorus)
I don’t know why and I don’t know how
But I’m still figuring it out
So I threw my arms around you
The truth is there, but oh it changes
No one else could understand
Who we are, and where we stand
And I know you’re there, and I know you care
So please, please take my hand

(Verse Two)
You were always by me
I knew but I couldn’t see
The arms in which you caught me in
Were there, but they weren’t seen
I don’t need them anymore
I built four walls without a door
Come stand next to me
Next to me instead

(CHORUS)

(BRIDGE)
And oh, oh how my eyes are opened
Wider each and every day
I’m finding myself, no,
I’m creating myself
I always find a way.

I said oh, oh how my eyes are opened
Every day, and every night
You can’t find yourself
Only create yourself
If there’s a will, there’s always a way

(END CHORUS)
So no I don’t know why
And no I don’t know how
But don’t worry
I’m figuring it out
If you’ll stand next to me
Nothing but equality
I hope you will, I know you will
Come… And take my hand.
Omg this is amazing, I almost cried  

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Quiet Misty Morning

PostPosted: Fri Aug 20, 2010 5:40 pm
Really? Haha, well thank you very much. It means a lot.  
PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 5:46 pm
Crit ticket.

I'll definitely give a full critique on this. You definitely deserve it.  

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Quiet Misty Morning

PostPosted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 9:23 am
Thanks. I think it could be a lot better, but I haven't put music with it yet. So I guess I'll see what happens. It might get tweaked a little.  
PostPosted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 10:32 am
Its versatile, and flows well in my head, I'd love to hear how you would sing it though, it may be even better!  

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 4:41 pm
OMG That was so amazing i love it ♥  
PostPosted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 10:08 pm
Thanks so much, everyone. And I love your signature toxic dreamer. It's beautiful.  

Quiet Misty Morning


Quiet Misty Morning

PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 10:52 pm
To whoever may care to know...

I've changed the lyrics some. Tweaked them just a tad. The song is beginning to take shape. I've got chords, and a potentially very good base for the melody. (Though it has taken me forever just to get this far). This song means so much to me. I feel music is all I have...and that it just might be enough. 3nodding  
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